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OLD TOM & the TIGER (with Hepcat61)
(a nursery sonnet)
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/239494-old-tom-and-the-tiger/
The tiger knew no cage but “habitat”
The time that I have spent away from home
She was the queen of her half-block domain
Has never been like there and yet the same.
She’d rest in summer shade like any cat
To take me back, but limit where I'd roam,
But then would come the cold mid-winter rain
That brought me down each time the winter came.
Old Tom, would lounge as well and watch her stalk
Most times while deep in thought while I would tread
As she would pace and watch the humans stare
Ignoring humans even though I'd see,
Old Tom would stride and match her walk for walk
From shadow's movement when I'd raise my head,
And she would smile to watch his strutting there
For there you'd be, Old Tom, amusing me.
But with the rain his queen would barely stir
The bitter cold of rain would have me think
These frigid rains that made her feel so sick,
About the trees and grasslands of my birth,
So lost, then came a rustle in her fur
Before my mother's lessons were extinct,
It was Old Tom with nip and tug and lick
And since, companionship of your full worth.
Old Tom would stay and play with her awhile,
You always knew just when the time was right
He always seemed to prod his tiger’s smile.
To visit with your queen to her delight.
With my gratitude for Geoff's permission to collaborate with his original write, as a call-and-response.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/239494-old-tom-and-the-tiger/
The tiger knew no cage but “habitat”
The time that I have spent away from home
She was the queen of her half-block domain
Has never been like there and yet the same.
She’d rest in summer shade like any cat
To take me back, but limit where I'd roam,
But then would come the cold mid-winter rain
That brought me down each time the winter came.
Old Tom, would lounge as well and watch her stalk
Most times while deep in thought while I would tread
As she would pace and watch the humans stare
Ignoring humans even though I'd see,
Old Tom would stride and match her walk for walk
From shadow's movement when I'd raise my head,
And she would smile to watch his strutting there
For there you'd be, Old Tom, amusing me.
But with the rain his queen would barely stir
The bitter cold of rain would have me think
These frigid rains that made her feel so sick,
About the trees and grasslands of my birth,
So lost, then came a rustle in her fur
Before my mother's lessons were extinct,
It was Old Tom with nip and tug and lick
And since, companionship of your full worth.
Old Tom would stay and play with her awhile,
You always knew just when the time was right
He always seemed to prod his tiger’s smile.
To visit with your queen to her delight.
With my gratitude for Geoff's permission to collaborate with his original write, as a call-and-response.
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