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The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
blood splashes
from orchid's lips
candle light
warm fire
tasting
your divinity
~
beneath water colored
lily's lies
dark melodies
bodies sway
dancing shadows
lovers dance
~
weeps the dying
of her silken flesh
mouth to mouth
my breath
brings back
life again
~
operatic ballet ensues
tempest winds blow me about
your fingers
touch me
so delicate
and precise
~
your love sees me through the storms
tasting cryptic phallus
in my arms
kissing your curves
hold me
until the end
~
consuming passion's hiss
pirouetting over oblivion deep
last dance
pushing hard
sweet asylum
silky utopia
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 31st May 2016
| Edited 1st Jun 2016
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Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
Anonymous
31st May 2016 8:52pm
Brenda, as always it's a total joy to write with you.. i think this might be our best, and that's saying a lot.. but this ink is so different, and lovely.. i absolutely adore it.. love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
31st May 2016 9:03pm
Dave I loved writing this with you it is a sensual ballet :)
love you my friend..
xoxo Brenda
love you my friend..
xoxo Brenda
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
31st May 2016 9:12pm
There's a difference in lovemaking and sex.
The former is a respite of communication and understanding,
the latter a pent up release. This is definitely the former.
One voice in two.
The former is a respite of communication and understanding,
the latter a pent up release. This is definitely the former.
One voice in two.
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
31st May 2016 9:21pm
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
Anonymous
31st May 2016 9:25pm
This is truly exquisite and I hope it will not take anything away from any of your other collabs, but this is probably the crowning jewel.
Good job by both of you.
Good job by both of you.
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
31st May 2016 9:37pm
thank you lovely Rina from us both for such a fantastic comment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
31st May 2016 11:00pm
This was composed quite well, both of you.
Giving into each others entreaties, enough
so that it is smooth as sexual silk and is a
wondrous composition.
Giving into each others entreaties, enough
so that it is smooth as sexual silk and is a
wondrous composition.
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
31st May 2016 11:40pm
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
Anonymous
- Edited 31st May 2016 11:46pm
31st May 2016 11:43pm
This so beautiful and skin
riveting , this is a another picturique
painting for my wall. Sweetgods
it's lovely.
You two embodied the fullness
of ink. Its one of the best collabs
I have read in while..a long time
to be exact.
-Will be back soon to purchase.
;)
riveting , this is a another picturique
painting for my wall. Sweetgods
it's lovely.
You two embodied the fullness
of ink. Its one of the best collabs
I have read in while..a long time
to be exact.
-Will be back soon to purchase.
;)
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
31st May 2016 11:58pm
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
Anonymous
1st Jun 2016 3:14am
My Beautiful Brenda and my brother Dave...flowing in elegance and beauty, this took my breath away...you two always amazed me when your minds collide...Bravo!!
Loving you both so much
Xoxo Taryn
Loving you both so much
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
1st Jun 2016 4:11am
thank you beautiful one from us both for such a lovely comment..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jun 2016 3:21am
1st Jun 2016 3:19am
Sweet Crim & Talented Diamond......what beautiful write you've shared with us.......absolutely luv this......you're talent together can't be matched......well done.....luv the layout of it......enjoyed......purple luv & hugs to you both xo :)
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
1st Jun 2016 4:12am
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
1st Jun 2016 5:04am
ballet is certainly the poetry of movement.
this is exquisitely choreographed...
this is exquisitely choreographed...
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
1st Jun 2016 8:43am
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
1st Jun 2016 6:26am
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
1st Jun 2016 8:43am
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
1st Jun 2016 11:39am
this reminded me so much of the kingdom of shades from la bayadere...
... a beauitiful write, both of you
xoxox
... a beauitiful write, both of you
xoxox
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
1st Jun 2016 3:08pm
thank you graciously from us both beautiful Katja..
had to Google the ballet kingdom of shades..
seems like a fantastic ballet I'm honored..
love Brenda
had to Google the ballet kingdom of shades..
seems like a fantastic ballet I'm honored..
love Brenda
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
Excellent collaboration! A graceful ballet written with beauty and precision.
"consuming passion's hiss
pirouetting over oblivion deep
last dance
pushing hard
sweet asylum
silky utopia"
Maybe that sweet asylum can be found at Swan Lake. Fine job by you both!
"consuming passion's hiss
pirouetting over oblivion deep
last dance
pushing hard
sweet asylum
silky utopia"
Maybe that sweet asylum can be found at Swan Lake. Fine job by you both!
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
2nd Jun 2016 6:55pm
Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
2nd Jun 2016 4:41am
I think you guys did a damn good job of blending your two paints together to make a unique shade of perfection. Love this collab and love the imagery. Take a bow you two.... Enjoyed!
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Re: Re. The Ballet Of Silken Orchid~with Diamonddave75
2nd Jun 2016 6:56pm
thank you graciously from us both lovely Rain shining radiantly from your beautiful comment :)
love Brenda
love Brenda