Blackened Offering

it's a dark Gothic opera, Crim,
sacrifice of the beautifully lost...

thank you John..

love Crim

thank you dearest Amelia..

love Crim

roar

thank you Graham..

love Crim

It's a dark offering for sure, can't imagine how such a willingness to give of self would be denied even in the abyss of hell... :)

thank you Poe..

love Crim

It's the purity in your words that always pulls me in Crim. As always, thank you.

thank you graciously Twitch..

love Crim

Awesome...great depth, and word usage. A pleading soul perfectly captured

:)

thank you most kindly FreyaJ..

love Crim

Sexy as Hell (pun intended), passionate yet ice cold and tragic beautiful. Pure Crimson!

thank you graciously Ed :)

love Crim

Salvation seems so far away when we place
it in someone other than ourselves.

You've captured it perfectly here, Crim.

very true wise one thank you..

love Crim

Never fear, Brenda, the dark forces will give
you what you have so eloquently beseeched
for. I so loved this poem, where you once again
got down to the nitty-gritty. Passions which cry
out for "blackened heart" I might even be within
those who came to feast upon your body . . .

Can never tell . . .

thank you Jerry gave me a big smile with your comment..

love Brenda

You can reign anywhere Crim, the abyss included.  This is thrilling work!

"come upon me once more      
let your filth rain down on me      
with fire and blood      
passions consumed"

This is like heroic fantasy with a demonic and erotic twist.   You've won my blackened heart Queen Crim.  

thank you Sir Crow your thoughts and visits are always cherished..

love Crim

People say vampires don't exist but they actually do I know someone who is

thank you Kavik they do indeed exist they are soul suckers ;)

love Brenda

thank you graciously Gabriel..

love Crim

Ah, my Queen of Darkness. . . ~in this grievous tomb I wait~ this verse brings the poetic darkness into light. . .I wish I had more to offer in way of a more in depth comment but, and unfortunately, I suck at it!. . .love to you. . .~Devlin/TS

My beautiful Queen of Darkness I must confess it's not as tragic as it seems since the comp. I'm stuck on Cradle Of Filth and was inspired while listening to their Gothic Romance song..

love you lady :)

xoxo Brenda

A very compelling plea in
your words has gone out
Brenda that would definitely
not fall on deaf ears.

Hel itself would embrace
your desire and give you
all you wish for.

  Dantalyon

thank you dearest Dantalyon hell's dark embrace a sweet kiss upon my lips..

love Brenda

This is beautiful ^^
I imagine this like a slow song

Maybe it's just me but love the flow :-)

thank you most graciously DC it was inspired by a Cradle Of Filth song..

so I believe it reads like a song thank you for picking up on that..

love Crim

Dearest Crim, your woven darkness is infectious. I feel the black stirring in this withered heart. I'm happy to see you enjoying Cradle. :)

thank you Darkest Lord they are awe inspiring with their music and lyrics..  
 
so grateful to see the Darkness stirring in you once more :)  
 
ever in darkness Crim

Brenda, this black opus is so brilliant.. you always you deliver, and get my darkened thoughts flowing.. loved this ink.. and love you!!



Dave

thank you Dave :)

I love you too..

xoxo Brenda

beautifully written dark piece of wanting and desire - could feel the passion :-)

thank you most kindly David..

love Brenda

...your dark mind is so damn gorgeous to me, Crim! xo

aw thank you graciously lovely Rain :)

love Crim

Such a glorious meal you are
my ladyloves!

now if I must sleep with lights  
on while feeling a little warm
and timidly tender   ;)




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thank you kindly beautiful Malady :)

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda.....oh the dark seduction you pull me in with in this one....I would feast upon you until the end of time....

"pull not from my darkened breast      
come now unto me      
I call to thee      
on my knees        
       
the underworld embraces this whore      
would you shun me?"
~ NEVER

How I love you so....

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you beautiful one smiling wide from your comment..

I love you so much :)

love Brenda

I enjoyed the intensity of this poem. And I like your style.   I felt the passion and need to be consumed. I enjoyed it very much.  I can't wait to read more of your work.

thank you most kindly and welcome to du..

love Crim