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Ten minutes life
It’s not that I’m normally shaking like a fool
it’s not that my heart beats need to be heard
I have no problem keeping my tears from falling
I always breathe without making any sound
I never sweat nor do I stutter.
It’s these ten minutes
that you made me wait for you
that changed me for an everlasting while.
Published 23rd May 2016
| Edited 24th May 2016
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24th May 2016 4:24am
24th May 2016 8:39am
Yeah... and it's interesting the changes you see to yourself during the waiting time.
I have to write something for the arrival as well :)
Thanks for reading and commenting :)
Art
I have to write something for the arrival as well :)
Thanks for reading and commenting :)
Art
24th May 2016 9:26am
this really made me smile, art... the anticipation is palpable between your lines
l2: should "bits" be beats, mayhap?
absolutely loved this
l2: should "bits" be beats, mayhap?
absolutely loved this
24th May 2016 11:21am
Lol! Thank you for the correction! You bit me! ha! :)
I wanted to create a pulsation before arriving to the end :)
Thank you for reading and comment dear Katja. Glad you liked it.
Kiss,
Art
I wanted to create a pulsation before arriving to the end :)
Thank you for reading and comment dear Katja. Glad you liked it.
Kiss,
Art
Anonymous
24th May 2016 6:27pm
I swear to to make this a part
of mu collage palace walls.
Its been a moment since visiting
here but always reading. Love
and enjoyed this as much.
Its coming with me as Readjust
lol. You posses raw harsh power.
of mu collage palace walls.
Its been a moment since visiting
here but always reading. Love
and enjoyed this as much.
Its coming with me as Readjust
lol. You posses raw harsh power.
25th May 2016 00:25am
Oh! Thank you so much Malady :)
I feel so honored! Glad you liked it!
Thank you for reading me and commenting!
This was a surprise comment and I love it :)
Many kisses,
Art
I feel so honored! Glad you liked it!
Thank you for reading me and commenting!
This was a surprise comment and I love it :)
Many kisses,
Art
