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Winter's traits
It's in times like
these,
that I can see
everything.
Every missing
thing.
When times call
for warmth,
I dwell in Her ice
storms.
It just never occurs
to Winter
that some need
more than a
hard freeze.
That sun could still
shine through Her
frozen breeze
in the name
of love and mercy,
for a forsaken'n
weary world.
Winter holds no
interest in the
world's want for
warmth..she's a
season that's
come and gone-
these,
that I can see
everything.
Every missing
thing.
When times call
for warmth,
I dwell in Her ice
storms.
It just never occurs
to Winter
that some need
more than a
hard freeze.
That sun could still
shine through Her
frozen breeze
in the name
of love and mercy,
for a forsaken'n
weary world.
Winter holds no
interest in the
world's want for
warmth..she's a
season that's
come and gone-
Published 23rd May 2016
| Edited 29th May 2016
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24th May 2016 1:36pm
Not sure about the last line and ensuing couplet adding to the impact
the way 'come and gone' does.
When Winter comes look for the prisms of sun through the ice, they're
the seasonal flowers that dance with light.
the way 'come and gone' does.
When Winter comes look for the prisms of sun through the ice, they're
the seasonal flowers that dance with light.
24th May 2016 2:33pm
Thank you so kindly.
Yeah,I scrapped the
last line and it does
look better,
Cheers
-j
Yeah,I scrapped the
last line and it does
look better,
Cheers
-j
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
27th May 2016 3:53pm
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