~lost in the dark~

Humm more absorbency... This I'll come back too soon

I feel as if here  I my self have found residency at a time of awakening. Awakening in its maiden voyage not of the serene, but that of shattering ones reality

thank you most kindly for such a poetic and insightful comment..

love Crim

Wow Crim! Firstly, that image goes perfectly with the imagery of your words. Secondly, so much dark despair painted on a charcoal canvas. Felt like I was lost in the dark too. Pen love~

#youdidthat.....

thank you graciously lovely Rain for the pen love :)

love Crim

tangled up in blue, sometimes it's a hurtful place.
fearless depth here, Crim...

thank you John for feeling the blue undercurrents of this write..

love Crim

this took me places, a few I'd forgotten.
thanks for sharing your lovely depths...this piece is exquisite.
love, xx

lovely Miki thank you from my heart for swimming in these blue waters with me..

love Brenda

I love when a poem is visually pleasing, then the content take me inside them :)
beautiful !

thank you most kindly Dejure..

love Crim

The song of a soul lost and alone, becalmed on the sea of life. The voice though is of a detached observer  - this is out of body...

thank you for your observations on this write.. hmm out of body I will have to think about that..

love Crim

I don't think you're alone deep underground.

"i've lost my soul    
somewhere in the vast dark    
the markers home tombstones    
   
where vultures perch    
tearing at my flesh    
as search I for the right path"

A Crow might come to your rescue Crim.  Fine work!    

thank you Sir Crow for reminding me I'm not alone was just feeling blue when I wrote this..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda, the lines throughout paint such a vivid picture as only you can do...I get lost and float with you within lines like this...

"I'm led to the abyss    
where i've vomited my thoughts    
there little pieces of me float    
   
I pick through the mire    
collecting the broken bones of me    
my skeletal being in there lies"

I love you so much!

xoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one for embracing me and this melancholy write..

I love you :)

xoxo Brenda

thank you most graciously Amelia you touched my heart..

love Crim

excellent description I saw every line and felt every line and share your fear of being alone in the dark :-)

such an excellent write - emotionally provocative :-)

thank you David for feeling this..

love Brenda

Brenda, such a wonderful ink.. love the flow, and the brilliance of your pen.. love..



Dave

thank you Dave for enjoying the blues with me..

love Brenda