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Boring
As a man moving forward
I took a look back
And what I saw
Was me moving forward
Still looking back
I was able to see today
Yesterday and tomorrow
I saw that what I did today
I also did yesterday
And I will probably do the same tomorrow
I am such a boring bastard
I took a look back
And what I saw
Was me moving forward
Still looking back
I was able to see today
Yesterday and tomorrow
I saw that what I did today
I also did yesterday
And I will probably do the same tomorrow
I am such a boring bastard
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Re. Boring
21st May 2016 00:37am
Re. Boring
21st May 2016 00:53am
Re. Boring
Anonymous
21st May 2016 1:53am
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Re: Re. Boring
21st May 2016 4:31am
[ Takes another puff ] - it didn't get better - must be a boring bastard after all :-)
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22nd May 2016 7:43pm
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Re: Re. Boring
22nd May 2016 9:48pm
"Boring – boring – boring – incorrect – super boring. Do you have any other channels?"
Your words exactly
I think it would be better if you did not comment any further on any of my poems in future, I am only happy to receive constructive comments, which you don't seem to be able to make - therefore please take this polite request for you to move on and away
Thank you
Your words exactly
I think it would be better if you did not comment any further on any of my poems in future, I am only happy to receive constructive comments, which you don't seem to be able to make - therefore please take this polite request for you to move on and away
Thank you
Re. Boring
21st May 2016 2:24am
I think we all think that at some time in our lives David...I enjoyed the read...
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Re: Re. Boring
21st May 2016 4:32am
Re. Boring
21st May 2016 2:29am
Re: Re. Boring
21st May 2016 4:35am
I love your appreciation It really brightens up my day :-}
thank you my dear friend :-}
thank you my dear friend :-}
Re. Boring
Anonymous
21st May 2016 2:39am
Yep David......I know what you mean......everyday seems the same at times.......I can relate......enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Boring
21st May 2016 4:38am
sometimes life just grabs you and makes you feel like that :-(
still, I am glad you enjoyed it - sending e-hugs right now :-}
still, I am glad you enjoyed it - sending e-hugs right now :-}
Re. Boring
21st May 2016 6:43am
Re: Re. Boring
23rd May 2016 00:32am
my brokeness is terminal I accept that I am broken and all I do every day is look for a fix
thank you for such a caring response :-)
thank you for such a caring response :-)
Re: Re. Boring
23rd May 2016 00:33am
my brokeness is terminal I accept that I am broken and all I do every day is look for a fix
thank you for such a caring response :-)
thank you for such a caring response :-)
Re. Boring
21st May 2016 10:20am
Hmm depends I guess..you never actually mentioned if you enjoyed wot you did yesterday or not :)
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Re: Re. Boring
23rd May 2016 00:35am
maybe its a good thing, but I can't remember - I still can't remember what I did tomorrow
ty for an interesting introspective question :-)
ty for an interesting introspective question :-)
Re. Boring
21st May 2016 12:11pm
Well that was boring
Only kidding
Here's a new idea
Tell me to shut up
Just once :-)
Only kidding
Here's a new idea
Tell me to shut up
Just once :-)
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Re: Re. Boring
23rd May 2016 00:36am
Re. Boring
21st May 2016 12:25pm
Well, enjoyed your humorous take on life Dave! Truly admire your humility mate!!
Awesome ink!
:)
KDAmB
Awesome ink!
:)
KDAmB
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Re: Re. Boring
23rd May 2016 00:39am
awe thanks, - but I am fuckin brilliant, an amazing talent and always modest :-)
seriously though I am glad you enjoyed it and took the time to say so - that means a lot to me :-)
seriously though I am glad you enjoyed it and took the time to say so - that means a lot to me :-)
Re. Boring
22nd May 2016 00:45am
The process of life is on repeat! We intertwine little things within the process to make it seem different and/or exciting but at the end of the day, same motions. lol. Nice expression of self awareness plus annoyance.
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Re: Re. Boring
23rd May 2016 00:40am
you got it - I was having a shit day when I wrote it - go figure :-)
I am glad you enjoyed this miserable muse :-)
I am glad you enjoyed this miserable muse :-)