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robotic
confused flow of literate
compunctions driven between
infinite meaning hiding in between
scripted words reposed upon
gleaming white sheet
of trees once alive
with which we clamor to uphold
our own self-righteous exclamations
proclaiming to be free inside
nonetheless farther from the truth
most of us merely glaze upon
the fabric we dub Life, reality
however few may be out there
existential wandering beings of light
forming their own thoughts upon
life lived to extent with wonder
not stamped out but freely growing
since physical life blossomed
while we watch on robotic temperament
focused only on the physicality
betrayed by our own clandestine appetites
of what we see around us as real
but nonetheless pursuing
something more than we can achieve
so if you wish to continue forth
tear away that robot mindset
with which we trap ourselves inside
forgoing a chance to be free
but if you so wish it
so shall it be
compunctions driven between
infinite meaning hiding in between
scripted words reposed upon
gleaming white sheet
of trees once alive
with which we clamor to uphold
our own self-righteous exclamations
proclaiming to be free inside
nonetheless farther from the truth
most of us merely glaze upon
the fabric we dub Life, reality
however few may be out there
existential wandering beings of light
forming their own thoughts upon
life lived to extent with wonder
not stamped out but freely growing
since physical life blossomed
while we watch on robotic temperament
focused only on the physicality
betrayed by our own clandestine appetites
of what we see around us as real
but nonetheless pursuing
something more than we can achieve
so if you wish to continue forth
tear away that robot mindset
with which we trap ourselves inside
forgoing a chance to be free
but if you so wish it
so shall it be
Published 19th May 2016
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28th May 2016 6:37pm
We do have wonderful shimmery ways
of lying to ourselves. It's a .. a
[Working Mechanism] to keep breathing
especially when in a life is difficult.
Some us have this [coping chip] and
don't even know.
But, these three passages explains
your whole message:
[with which we clamor to uphold
our own self-righteous exclamations
proclaiming to be free inside
nonetheless farther from the truth
most of us merely glaze upon
the fabric we dub Life, reality
however few may be out there
existential wandering beings of light
forming their own thoughts upon
life lived to extent with wonder
not stamped out but freely growing
since physical life blossomed
while we watch on robotic temperament
focused only on the physicality
betrayed by our own clandestine appetites
of what we see around us as real
but nonetheless pursuing
something more than we can achieve ]
of lying to ourselves. It's a .. a
[Working Mechanism] to keep breathing
especially when in a life is difficult.
Some us have this [coping chip] and
don't even know.
But, these three passages explains
your whole message:
[with which we clamor to uphold
our own self-righteous exclamations
proclaiming to be free inside
nonetheless farther from the truth
most of us merely glaze upon
the fabric we dub Life, reality
however few may be out there
existential wandering beings of light
forming their own thoughts upon
life lived to extent with wonder
not stamped out but freely growing
since physical life blossomed
while we watch on robotic temperament
focused only on the physicality
betrayed by our own clandestine appetites
of what we see around us as real
but nonetheless pursuing
something more than we can achieve ]
29th May 2016 8:58pm
gratitude for both comment and feedback we are merely human most of us at least and yes its interesting indeed
