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Afterlife ~ Remembering You
dancing freely in the sensual falling rain
with a luving smile upon our faces
souls soaking up every raindrop kiss
as the two of us romantically swayed
fell into a shallow grave terrified
not knowing it was meant to be mine
feeling empty......cold.....lost in life
last sound was hearing you weeping
barely felt my heart pounding
gasping for every breath
my body sank deeper in the earth
as the softened ground buried me alive
time raced by and days disappeared
looking down upon your smile
holding and kissing another
almost seeming familiar to me
beautiful Angel sitting next to me asked....
"do you remember him?"
"not sure"....was my instant reply
"he was your luv before you died"
with an Angelic touch emotions came back
remembering the most perfect luv
that was ever created with a heavenly sigh
you and her so sacredly in luv as we were
watched you dance from my rain filled eyes
with a luving smile upon your faces
souls soaking up every teardrop memories
with the two of you gracefully swaying together.....
then the heavens flashed purple
sitting next to me a handsome heavenly Angel
saw people crying and hugging her so tenderly
I asked you...."do you remember us?"
(Just thoughts that came to me on this subject)
with a luving smile upon our faces
souls soaking up every raindrop kiss
as the two of us romantically swayed
fell into a shallow grave terrified
not knowing it was meant to be mine
feeling empty......cold.....lost in life
last sound was hearing you weeping
barely felt my heart pounding
gasping for every breath
my body sank deeper in the earth
as the softened ground buried me alive
time raced by and days disappeared
looking down upon your smile
holding and kissing another
almost seeming familiar to me
beautiful Angel sitting next to me asked....
"do you remember him?"
"not sure"....was my instant reply
"he was your luv before you died"
with an Angelic touch emotions came back
remembering the most perfect luv
that was ever created with a heavenly sigh
you and her so sacredly in luv as we were
watched you dance from my rain filled eyes
with a luving smile upon your faces
souls soaking up every teardrop memories
with the two of you gracefully swaying together.....
then the heavens flashed purple
sitting next to me a handsome heavenly Angel
saw people crying and hugging her so tenderly
I asked you...."do you remember us?"
(Just thoughts that came to me on this subject)
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Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
Anonymous
18th May 2016 3:24am
Wow, very powerful. Written as a dream of visceral love in an eternal format?
Very nice as usual!
Very nice as usual!

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Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
19th May 2016 1:20am
Awe SlowG.......I wrote this so many ways till I finally got it to reflect what I felt deep inside thinking a out luved ones in heaven.....will we remember each other when we meet once again......thank you for your gracious support......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
18th May 2016 3:54am
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19th May 2016 1:23am
Haha SG......don't be jealous......I'm sure I will remember you......you've been a blessing to me......thank you for being a friend to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
18th May 2016 2:02pm
Brought back a pleasant memory of my honeymoon. Thank you. I needed this today. 😊
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Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
19th May 2016 1:24am
Awe Black.......I'm thrilled it brought back happy memories.......thank you for sharing that with me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
18th May 2016 4:14pm
Some hide and seek kind of poetical writing, if I
may conclude. The After Life. I personally believe
in reincarnation. Saying that it kinda makes sense
that two souls, lovers in the here and now could
very personally be together again in a, shall we
say, parallel life.
may conclude. The After Life. I personally believe
in reincarnation. Saying that it kinda makes sense
that two souls, lovers in the here and now could
very personally be together again in a, shall we
say, parallel life.
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Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
19th May 2016 2:12am
Hey SG......luv it that you've shared such thoughts with me.......I've often wondered if we will know each other behind the clouds......I respect your believes.......guess we will only truly know when the time arrives we cross the line of death......thank you for sharing with me and inspiring more thoughts.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
18th May 2016 5:24pm
Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
19th May 2016 2:14am
Awe Kavik......I know one person that will always remember you.......ME!!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
18th May 2016 10:06pm
Bittersweet, beautiful and blessed.. Love restored in the afterlife is something to pray for. It would probably take a pure and untroubled form, maybe one with wings. Fine work angelic Flower!
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Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
19th May 2016 2:17am
Hi Crow......this is something I've always wondered about.......it's a subject written a lot about on another site......so I brought my own ideas......LOL!! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me......I believe you've already earned wings......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
19th May 2016 00:53am
A spiritually powerful piece about a love that's outta this world... Nicely done Purple one! :)
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Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
19th May 2016 2:19am
You always bring me smiles of warmth upon my soul.......thank you Poet for your graceful words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
20th May 2016 3:43am
dreamy and nightmarish, full of passion and fear, so beautifully written, really got to me this one, glassy eyes and a lump in my throat - it takes a special write to get to me in that way :-}
simply beautiful :-}
simply beautiful :-}
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Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
20th May 2016 4:44pm
David my friend......I'm very honored for the RL add on and your precious words.......I'm thrilled this touched your emotions so very much.......it did mine as I wrote it.......thank you for sharing thoughts with me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
28th May 2016 10:08pm
Someday, I will experience such heavens ;)
you're piece render me to sincere yearning.
-Howlings
you're piece render me to sincere yearning.
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Afterlife ~ Remembering You
29th May 2016 3:37pm
Awe Howlings......it's a wonderful peace to be luved so sacredly.......I hope you do get the experience........uplifts your soul to the most high......thank you for taking time to share thoughts with me......purple luv & hugs xo :)