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I No Longer Split Infinity
My moral compass
trapped me in its
impossibly wide circles.
The road I should not have taken,
much too enticing to resist,
turned into a Möbius strip.
I've now hidden the time turner,
woven those sweet dreams into
a shroud of gossamer and yearning
to remind me of what could never be.
Published 15th May 2016
| Edited 25th May 2016
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16th May 2016 9:29pm
blinded us w/science & math,
& dreams too ethereal to be captured.
splendorous...
& dreams too ethereal to be captured.
splendorous...
17th May 2016 3:42am
Hmmm.. Pondering your comment, I'm not sure whether you're saying there's too much math and science (I'd believe it) or not. Please be blunt - I can certainly take it. On the other hand, I was playing with this one and science concepts helped me achieve that distance from a tricky subject (giving in to temptation). There are other poems of mine that have no science whatsoever. You might give His Myth of Love, my first one, a try. Let me know what you think.
17th May 2016 7:01am
it's a great poem, my ability to critique it properly falls short. this is the obligation of poetry, to put so much of ourselves into it...
