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ELEMENTS
Deserts radiant with light
And awe in our mountains
Rest forbidden by the elements
At our highest pinnacles
The bubbles ascend
In our lakes in our valleys
And the sediment descends
And we are water
A treasure of air
In the water
A treasure of water
In the skies
Let our fires warm
Let our fires burn
Let us be fire
With out babies born in blood
With our purpose shroud in loss
And our bliss
The poise between
Let our fires burn
Let our fires warm
Let us be fire
And awe in our mountains
Rest forbidden by the elements
At our highest pinnacles
The bubbles ascend
In our lakes in our valleys
And the sediment descends
And we are water
A treasure of air
In the water
A treasure of water
In the skies
Let our fires warm
Let our fires burn
Let us be fire
With out babies born in blood
With our purpose shroud in loss
And our bliss
The poise between
Let our fires burn
Let our fires warm
Let us be fire
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Re. ELEMENTS
8th May 2016 4:33pm
The bubbles ascend
In our lakes in our valleys
And the sediment descends
And we are water
A treasure of air
In the water
A treasure of water
In the skies
Indeed, my brother. Indeed.
Beautifully elemental poem of descending, ascending, and transcending beyond.
In our lakes in our valleys
And the sediment descends
And we are water
A treasure of air
In the water
A treasure of water
In the skies
Indeed, my brother. Indeed.
Beautifully elemental poem of descending, ascending, and transcending beyond.
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8th May 2016 4:56pm
This is beyond beautiful! I've read it several times and will likely do so again. Thank you for sharing this incredible expression ☺
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8th May 2016 5:27pm
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8th May 2016 6:02pm
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8th May 2016 7:07pm
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8th May 2016 7:08pm
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9th May 2016 00:41am
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9th May 2016 2:55am
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9th May 2016 4:57am
I must say thank you for the
peace enlaced and bestowed
through your ink.. .
so much needed, more than I-
myself know.
Beautiful, clashing and soul
sedation
-Howlings
peace enlaced and bestowed
through your ink.. .
so much needed, more than I-
myself know.
Beautiful, clashing and soul
sedation
-Howlings
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9th May 2016 5:44pm
OverWhelmed once more with your kind comment and thank you for the add of EMANATE
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9th May 2016 9:21am
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11th May 2016 7:31pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
13th May 2016 4:14pm
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Anonymous
2nd Jun 2016 7:46am
A piece that makes me bow in my
feminine humbleness.
Love it
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feminine humbleness.
Love it
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2nd Jun 2016 8:06am
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