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Murmurs
Beating in between the
Circulations recalling crimson
Read by motive reactions
Returning to heart once blue
Dispatched eternals flaming
As vapors beseech accounts
Memoirs of love burned instead
Faint rhythms still acquaint this feel
Published 3rd May 2016
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3rd May 2016 00:47am
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3rd May 2016 6:53am
20th May 2016 5:05pm
3rd May 2016 5:54pm
Every time I read your work aloud
a beat forms. Some things embedded
within us are triggered by remembrances.
a beat forms. Some things embedded
within us are triggered by remembrances.
20th May 2016 5:09pm
Rhythm Recognition...what a blessing.....Thanks Ahavati again for checking me....ONE
