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Haiku: the virgin

to hear her haiku
i'll ransack every Ryu
imbibe each bayou...

Written by DeanD

Published 30th Apr 2016

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Re. Haiku: the virgin

30th Apr 2016 10:22pm

Dean a very passionate and beautiful Haiku :)

love Crimsin

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Re. Haiku: the virgin

30th Apr 2016 10:34pm

thanx Crim, i bust my haiku cherry, lol...

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Re. Haiku: the virgin

9th May 2016 5:29am

You made haikus epic. You mixed concise with strong references and with passion. I just gained a higher respect for haikus. Well written.

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Re. Haiku: the virgin

14th May 2016 5:30am

Love this, Dean! I talk too much to compress my speech into 17 syllables. ;)

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Re. Haiku: the virgin

8th Jun 2016 11:14am

A man who moves the world for what he loves in 17 syllables. Wondrous, Dean.

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