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The invisible hand
This
invisible hand
it
squeezes
my heart
every time I
hear of
pain
sufferings
sorrows.
When will
I be
able to
grab it
out of
my chest
through my
throat and
just be
left alone
with my
heart
which hasn't
ever been
the case
Published 30th Apr 2016
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30th Apr 2016 7:21pm
Well posed question.
The answer is when you stop caring,
The price of empathy is pain, the price of apathy is emptiness,
The answer is when you stop caring,
The price of empathy is pain, the price of apathy is emptiness,
2nd May 2016 11:05pm
Than You Northern1! Wise and true words there, couldn't agree more! Thank you for your kind words and visiting with me!
KDAmB
KDAmB
1st May 2016 1:27am
Yeah - have to echo the thoughts of northern1 :-(
so beautifully written :-)
so beautifully written :-)
2nd May 2016 11:08pm
2nd May 2016 10:21am
This is touching (please ignore pun)...Mother Gaia needs more hearts like yours my friend. LR :)
2nd May 2016 11:12pm
Welcome L and thank you my friend for your thoughts on this... there's heaps of all types roaming this earth I guess am just one of the many on the other end of the spectrum...
KDAmB
KDAmB
6th May 2016 8:21am
6th May 2016 1:02pm
Thank You Bluesky for your kind words. You're absolutely spot on! I welcome your presence and opinion immensely.
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Anonymous
29th Jul 2016 5:10pm
Aww...this made my heart smile.
Such a beautiful piece.
A heart that beats so deeply, because of the depth of kindness, goodness, wrapped in caring beauty.
Not a weakness, but a great strength.
Such a beautiful piece.
A heart that beats so deeply, because of the depth of kindness, goodness, wrapped in caring beauty.
Not a weakness, but a great strength.
29th Jul 2016 6:34pm
Thank You!
I am humbled by your kindness! There are some things in life we can change and some we can't -gotta accept and live with that. This is one of them, perhaps!
I am humbled by your kindness! There are some things in life we can change and some we can't -gotta accept and live with that. This is one of them, perhaps!
Anonymous
29th Jul 2016 6:46pm
Yes...very much so.
As you know, I truly understand those words. Very well.
As you know, I truly understand those words. Very well.
29th Jul 2016 6:59pm
4th Aug 2016 4:55pm
you spoke into me in every
way.. .
how dare you do that . . with
words of few.
my lungs are filled with wild
rivalries in constant search
relveries
littledustofgods..
-Howlings
way.. .
how dare you do that . . with
words of few.
my lungs are filled with wild
rivalries in constant search
relveries
littledustofgods..
-Howlings
4th Aug 2016 4:58pm
MsWhelms...you humble me with your downpour of praise..simply lost for words of gratitude! Much obliged... thanking your from the heart!!
