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Bleak
This addiction, affliction;
still searching for the book.
Aisles run on, knowledge's endless gurgling brook.
But is it fact or fiction?
Was fate or free will its writer?
Thoughts so intricate, mind's spiders.
Questions like naked before silent and invisible answers,
Just another clueless, cosmic dancer.
Mystical path of spirit;
mostly feel, occasionally hear it.
Infinite unlike intellect,
Grasping at the ether to comprehend it.
On I fight to find my way,
For stagnant will be my demise.
Yet I'm dead already knowing,
Just another earthling unwise.
Copyrights 2016 Michael J. Kucera
still searching for the book.
Aisles run on, knowledge's endless gurgling brook.
But is it fact or fiction?
Was fate or free will its writer?
Thoughts so intricate, mind's spiders.
Questions like naked before silent and invisible answers,
Just another clueless, cosmic dancer.
Mystical path of spirit;
mostly feel, occasionally hear it.
Infinite unlike intellect,
Grasping at the ether to comprehend it.
On I fight to find my way,
For stagnant will be my demise.
Yet I'm dead already knowing,
Just another earthling unwise.
Copyrights 2016 Michael J. Kucera
Published 25th Apr 2016
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25th Apr 2016 5:42am
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25th Apr 2016 7:18am
hey thx for making me smile you:)...makes it all worthwhile...for the read and your too kind words...and yes, at least partly personal, maybe even completely with some of the hidden meaning. And it challenged me to write it;always good to keep trying to improve in our own creative ways right?...lol...peace
your friend,
Michael
your friend,
Michael
25th Apr 2016 12:59pm
Wow, this is brilliant. Every line was so beautifully crafted, I particularly liked this bit "Thought's so intricate, mind's spiders.".
26th Apr 2016 12:30pm
hey headlight:)
wow, thank you for such kind words..really glad you enjoyed it...and appreciate the read also...I spent a lot of time on the intricacy of it to try and get the flow just right so it means a lot to hear that..and glad you liked the phrase...I added you as a friend also so I can check out your writes..peace
Michael
wow, thank you for such kind words..really glad you enjoyed it...and appreciate the read also...I spent a lot of time on the intricacy of it to try and get the flow just right so it means a lot to hear that..and glad you liked the phrase...I added you as a friend also so I can check out your writes..peace
Michael
Anonymous
11th May 2016 5:35pm
WOW..can't believe this only has 30 reads...this is seriously genius...thx for sharing a masterpiece:)
