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Unwind
And i gasp and body shakes
As his volcanic rise finds his spending rhythm between my thighs
The deep he finds
And my tremble there
Through hard stroke that verges on too much...
As pain swells to break through and I Ahhh Fuck Me!! Find pleasure
And he releases my scream....
My fingers dig into his fleshy mounds
To pull him allll up inside..
To be one body in perfect pelvic return..
Nails sink further with my abandon until
Red rivulets of animal thanks lover run over my fingertips
Knees hit my ears
And tears hit my eyes
As he cries Glory!
During furious thrust...
Tip blooms to beauty spill and hits cervix hungry for his seed..
We have satisfied each others need
And now lay hot
Twisted in sweaty sheets..
Safe in arms that hold each other ..
For a while. Only a while....
As his volcanic rise finds his spending rhythm between my thighs
The deep he finds
And my tremble there
Through hard stroke that verges on too much...
As pain swells to break through and I Ahhh Fuck Me!! Find pleasure
And he releases my scream....
My fingers dig into his fleshy mounds
To pull him allll up inside..
To be one body in perfect pelvic return..
Nails sink further with my abandon until
Red rivulets of animal thanks lover run over my fingertips
Knees hit my ears
And tears hit my eyes
As he cries Glory!
During furious thrust...
Tip blooms to beauty spill and hits cervix hungry for his seed..
We have satisfied each others need
And now lay hot
Twisted in sweaty sheets..
Safe in arms that hold each other ..
For a while. Only a while....
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 22nd Apr 2016
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Re. Unwind
22nd Apr 2016 6:03pm
To pull him allll up inside..
To be one body in perfect pelvic return..
nice lines xD
nice read
To be one body in perfect pelvic return..
nice lines xD
nice read
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Re. Unwind
22nd Apr 2016 6:17pm
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22nd Apr 2016 6:54pm
Pure primal fuck power. I loved this! You got it going Sistah. This rocks!
Love,
John
Love,
John
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Re. Unwind
22nd Apr 2016 8:41pm
I would leave the misspelt 'all' as it is, to add emphasis to the monologue. Favourite verses - three and four.
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Re. Unwind
24th Apr 2016 9:55am
miss ginnykins, i read both your entries in that thread & while i love this one, the second stole the damn show...
... your authenticity is admirable
love you stacks, lady
xoxox
... your authenticity is admirable
love you stacks, lady
xoxox
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24th Apr 2016 10:22am
Awe....babydoll
Have missed you terribly...
Thanks...i like it a lot too...especially because it was misspelled and i didnt use the buddy system to edit...🍄
English isnt quite my second language...but kinda....people from friggin Vermont would not be able to follow a convo between me an mih Mama....lol
It is so sweet to see ypu!! Grabbin your cheeks and givin you a big smooch!
Have missed you terribly...
Thanks...i like it a lot too...especially because it was misspelled and i didnt use the buddy system to edit...🍄
English isnt quite my second language...but kinda....people from friggin Vermont would not be able to follow a convo between me an mih Mama....lol
It is so sweet to see ypu!! Grabbin your cheeks and givin you a big smooch!
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24th Apr 2016 10:36am
smooches back at ya, rebel lady ;)
i stuck bits of an entirely different alphabet in mine
coz i'm cunty like that lol
i stuck bits of an entirely different alphabet in mine
coz i'm cunty like that lol
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I just love cunts....✌
And cannot wait to see them buddy up on Russian.....lmss
And cannot wait to see them buddy up on Russian.....lmss
Re. Unwind
24th Apr 2016 10:53am
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2016 10:21pm
Only for a while, until the next time I'm guessing. ;-)
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Re. Unwind
24th Apr 2016 10:27pm
I cry Glory! just reading this. Gearing up or unwinding, you're a force of nature Jen, always a thrill to read. And I love that last line hinting at pleasures to come. Don't mind loosening up with you at all.
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Re. Unwind
25th Apr 2016 1:13pm
Your last line shows the fleeting nature of the act. I suppose it needs love in between to connect it together. Beautifully done Jen.
Love
John
Love
John
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Re. Unwind
26th Apr 2016 1:36am
Primal
Powerful
Bursting with unrestrained pleasure in every line.
This I really like Calamity
Powerful
Bursting with unrestrained pleasure in every line.
This I really like Calamity
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Re. Unwind
5th May 2016 5:28am
I'm here and this just made me
mouth water.. uncontrollably
in some sort of nice way,
Heated and flushed
-Howlings
mouth water.. uncontrollably
in some sort of nice way,
Heated and flushed
-Howlings
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Re. Unwind
13th Jul 2016 00:28am
I love your writing and have been stalking you for a few weeks slowly making my way through your masterful ink and waiting for one piece to particularly inspire me... Your line 'my fingers dig into his fleshy mounds' gives me the most tantalizing and graphic image picturing my perfectly manicured nails breaking off on a golden mans rippling hard muscle-bound shoulders and I literally was biting my lip. Read it over and over and am in love with the fluid rawness of it misspelled words and all makes it feel like you were writing it while fucking and/or reliving the fuck while writing! Awesome!
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24th Aug 2016 3:01am
Babydoll...not on here much anymore...well until now...not at all in months...but if you fb me...i will tell you where ...
Ooh scary...giving fb to a stalker...but damnut neva had mih own...lol
Jen mcCurry Springfield fb
Ooh scary...giving fb to a stalker...but damnut neva had mih own...lol
Jen mcCurry Springfield fb