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( a Pantoum )

A note from deep within rewrites our song,  
That from above in cloudless sky rains down.  
All senses come alive before too long,  
Electrified from daybreak to sundown.  
 
That from above in cloudless sky rains down,  
The first sound that I hear is but a taste.  
Electrified from daybreak to sundown,  
To multiply and drench me in your haste.  
 
The first sound that I hear is but a taste,  
To what you'll bring to me in thunder's roll.  
To multiply and drench me in your haste,  
And further drown me as my lover's soul.  
 
For what you'll bring to me in thunder's roll,  
Can more than equal others' want of me.  
And further drown me as my lover's soul  
To match & raise the stakes to keep me free.  
 
Can more than equal others' want of me,  
All senses come alive before too long.  
To match & raise the stakes to keep me free,  
A note from deep within rewrites our song.  
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Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published | Edited 26th Jul 2018
Author's Note
(A Pantoum: rhyme scheme: abab, 10-syllable line count.)
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