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Puzzles
We connect like a puzzle
Me and him with you she and her
We connect through our bodies
And it feels so right
So right to the point
Maybe I’ll just spend the night
Extend that to reading rights
To maybe baby make life
Cause we connect like a puzzle
And it feels so right
But let's shed some light
Like don’t let two bodies unite
Cause if the minds collide but fit right
Then you’re forcing a puzzle and
That’s just not right.
I know the sex feels good
But the minds must match
Spark each other’s souls
Set off the flame to the match
Cause when the souls match
Your love stands out of the batch.
Look out for that one hard catch
And give your body a rest.
Cause we connect like a puzzles
Me him with you she and her.
Me and him with you she and her
We connect through our bodies
And it feels so right
So right to the point
Maybe I’ll just spend the night
Extend that to reading rights
To maybe baby make life
Cause we connect like a puzzle
And it feels so right
But let's shed some light
Like don’t let two bodies unite
Cause if the minds collide but fit right
Then you’re forcing a puzzle and
That’s just not right.
I know the sex feels good
But the minds must match
Spark each other’s souls
Set off the flame to the match
Cause when the souls match
Your love stands out of the batch.
Look out for that one hard catch
And give your body a rest.
Cause we connect like a puzzles
Me him with you she and her.
Published 6th Apr 2016
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7th Apr 2016 2:49pm
Looks on face of it like a foursome or two couples sharing a sex session. (Reminded me of the 'original' Siamese twins Chang and Eng who each married, shared same marital bed and each had large families!)
7th Apr 2016 4:38pm
Bob and Carol and Ted and Alice? In a metaphorical sense, maybe... But I suspect the message is a little more complex than that... And just like a relationship, understanding it will take effort.
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- Edited 22nd Jan 2018 11:24pm
22nd Jan 2018 11:22pm
Hmmmm. "Me and him with you she and her." Group sex and second thoughts about continuing it, OR him is me and she and her is you? Two people with layers and different angles allowing one or more to come out to the surface or up front when they just need to slow their roll and relish what's more important, which is Intimacy. Mental and emotional intimacy before the physical/sexual kind. Taking time to make sure the mind matches is crucial when you want something to last a long time. I'd love to hear more about "Me him with you she and her." Intriguing.
