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Rose Of Fire
I lay my soul at your heart tonight
here I am at the mercy of desire
luv me to the edge of sanity
thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch
in silence of this night take me for all that I offer
speak to me without voice
soft touches across my skin is what I desire
lips on flesh all night is what I long for
ravage my mind into a state of thoughtlessness
take our world of fantasy and let it become real
even if just in my dreams we embrace
let us be as we are joined as one spirit
hot passion invading each other's darkness
bringing us to life till morning light
beyond the stars on this silent night
set our hearts on fire with sacred passion
let the flame of our luv glow across heavens skies
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
here I am at the mercy of desire
luv me to the edge of sanity
thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch
in silence of this night take me for all that I offer
speak to me without voice
soft touches across my skin is what I desire
lips on flesh all night is what I long for
ravage my mind into a state of thoughtlessness
take our world of fantasy and let it become real
even if just in my dreams we embrace
let us be as we are joined as one spirit
hot passion invading each other's darkness
bringing us to life till morning light
beyond the stars on this silent night
set our hearts on fire with sacred passion
let the flame of our luv glow across heavens skies
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 6th Apr 2016
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6th Apr 2016 4:35am
.....talk about a 'flower' on fire..... damn! ;)
" thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch" <--- that's pretty darn hot right thurrrr! xo
" thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch" <--- that's pretty darn hot right thurrrr! xo
8th Apr 2016 00:37am
Hey Sexy Rain.......so glad you enjoyed my hotness.......this "flower" definetely feeling on fire......always appreciate your words and smile upon my ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
6th Apr 2016 4:36am
ooh my my my little purple pony, you are in a hot zone!
"thrust within me till my screams break glass"
Teasing, pleasing, just the right amount of lust
And it sounds slow good to me!
"thrust within me till my screams break glass"
Teasing, pleasing, just the right amount of lust
And it sounds slow good to me!
8th Apr 2016 00:52am
HI SG.......appreciate you stoping by the "hot zone".......happy you enjoyed the "slooooow" burn of lust......smiling from your visit......purple lust & hugs your way xo :)
6th Apr 2016 5:03am
wow when you're talking about fire... each stanza got hotter and hotter to the very end *whew* make a reader catch a fever hehe... excellent ink i love it! *huggies* :D
8th Apr 2016 1:06am
Hi Magic.......so happy to have gotten you sweatin.......some fevers aren't so bad......LOL!! Thank you for the energetic words......honored by the RL add on.......purple luv & "huggies" xo :)
6th Apr 2016 9:09am
8th Apr 2016 1:09am
Hey JJ......you know I luv "blazing" the purple ink......thank you my precious friend.....glad you enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Apr 2016 11:55am
"speak to me without voice
soft touches across my skin is what I desire
lips on flesh all night is what I long for"
Yes indeed, and yes indeed again. Your voice
is screaming for the need in you to be relinquished.
Everything about this sensuous poem is dynamite!
soft touches across my skin is what I desire
lips on flesh all night is what I long for"
Yes indeed, and yes indeed again. Your voice
is screaming for the need in you to be relinquished.
Everything about this sensuous poem is dynamite!
8th Apr 2016 1:18am
Hey SG......lets just hope this "dynamite" doesn't blow before I get to scream......thank you for your exciting response......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Apr 2016 2:01pm
sexy but still very romantic piece - it's the kind of erotic poetry I really like yet cannot write :-)
great stuff :-)
great stuff :-)
Hey David......always a smile when I see your words upon my ink......you can write like this......close your eyes......see what you feel.....let it move thru your soul......then let the ink drip from within your thoughts and feelings......you can do it!!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Apr 2016 4:47pm
you have ignited a fire
in so many across this site entire
now get gallons of cold water
they will else die trying to fulfill their desire
you catch each one in turn
and burn
them entire
and
let that be their last desire
not to with another one try to ignite a flaming fire
as they smoulder in your frame entire
lay purple flowers on all of em
if you may
and say
where are all of them
now ask of their destinations
fired choked forests smoking
and then wet days
they will not theirs again raise
you have so many
from this world of love erased
in so many across this site entire
now get gallons of cold water
they will else die trying to fulfill their desire
you catch each one in turn
and burn
them entire
and
let that be their last desire
not to with another one try to ignite a flaming fire
as they smoulder in your frame entire
lay purple flowers on all of em
if you may
and say
where are all of them
now ask of their destinations
fired choked forests smoking
and then wet days
they will not theirs again raise
you have so many
from this world of love erased
8th Apr 2016 2:07am
Wow!! What a response my friend.......this is awesome......I'm so honored to be such an inspiration.......thank you for this upon my page.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Apr 2016 4:02am
you add me as a poet
then remove me as quickly
to remind me
I am just another
wood maker only
going back and forth
as they all do daily
but I have outlived my teens
and
now lay earth and heaven in between
never mind I will still read your poetry
superfine eroticae kind
BUT TOO SOFT STILL
YES soft
for men of my kind
then remove me as quickly
to remind me
I am just another
wood maker only
going back and forth
as they all do daily
but I have outlived my teens
and
now lay earth and heaven in between
never mind I will still read your poetry
superfine eroticae kind
BUT TOO SOFT STILL
YES soft
for men of my kind
8th Apr 2016 4:33am
Hey Again...remove you from where....not sure what you're talking about.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
12th May 2016 7:00am
from ur poets reading lists
u remove me
ie follow then unfollow
now ur not following me
thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch
in silence of this night take me for all that I offer
see ten of ur love poems
are not equal to a single erotica
365 reads
all guys want their johns standing
ever ready to be fixed in
help those young kids
masturbating
reading your erotica
sharing your hot experience
they love to be fucked
or
else would love to fux
help em kids
still in their teens
masturbating solilolly
hoping u r in between
give in
let em cummmmm
issue only tissue
u remove me
ie follow then unfollow
now ur not following me
thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch
in silence of this night take me for all that I offer
see ten of ur love poems
are not equal to a single erotica
365 reads
all guys want their johns standing
ever ready to be fixed in
help those young kids
masturbating
reading your erotica
sharing your hot experience
they love to be fucked
or
else would love to fux
help em kids
still in their teens
masturbating solilolly
hoping u r in between
give in
let em cummmmm
issue only tissue
6th Apr 2016 7:01pm
8th Apr 2016 2:21am
Thank you Kavik.....glad you enjoyed the fire......always make me smile......grateful for you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
6th Apr 2016 11:31pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed... Hot damn woman!!!
"thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch"
*
"ravage my mind into a state of thoughtlessness"
!! !!
$+@% ;^,&*£ ${@@!!!!!!!!!!
In the list!!!
With love - Sweet S xoxo
"thrust within me till my screams break glass
make this body dance and quiver at a fingers touch"
*
"ravage my mind into a state of thoughtlessness"
!! !!
$+@% ;^,&*£ ${@@!!!!!!!!!!
In the list!!!
With love - Sweet S xoxo
8th Apr 2016 2:30am
Hey Sweet S......what can I say.....was feeling a bit....."fired up".......LOL!! Super honored for the RL add on and "! !! $+@% ;^,&*£ ${@@!!!!!!!!!!" Right back at ya sexy Woman!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
This, flowergirl, luv, is quite, quite extraordinary, as are you. :-*
Consistently, your gentle, tender touch flows throughout DUP soothing and full of compassion. Tis wondrous to behold, luv.
This poem contains that same essential nature of tender compassion infused with a veritable inferno of frank and abandoned passion. Tis a potent combination indeed, kind spirit. ;-*
Tis nigh irresistible, methinks, for tis love infused through and through...
You write it exquisitely, luv. :-*
Consistently, your gentle, tender touch flows throughout DUP soothing and full of compassion. Tis wondrous to behold, luv.
This poem contains that same essential nature of tender compassion infused with a veritable inferno of frank and abandoned passion. Tis a potent combination indeed, kind spirit. ;-*
Tis nigh irresistible, methinks, for tis love infused through and through...
You write it exquisitely, luv. :-*
8th Apr 2016 2:50am
Hi Savaja......your kind words have brought a smile upon my heart......humbly I thank you......many emotions this brings.......I'm struggling to find words to express such a worthy thank you......you've encouraged me to keep being here......appreciate you......purple smiles....luv & hugs your way xo :)
9th Apr 2016 12:31pm
10th Apr 2016 2:05am
Hey Glen.......thrilled to see you my sacred friend.......glad your well enough to bring me a smile......I truly hope this didn't over heat your heart though......LOL!! Thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
1st Dec 2016 1:44am
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1st Dec 2016 2:42am
Hey Adam.....luv it when souls take time to drift thru the oldies........thank you so very much......I'm grateful.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
