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Dream My Luv
will never forget the day I met you
your words smiled at me so sweetly
as they still do after all this time
you hugged this shattered to pieces heart
bleeding with sadness of memories
from a haunted luver licking it's tears
instead of staring thru the teardrops
you embraced them with luving kisses
moved thru my heart with your soft voice
how soothing.....calm.....peaceful
my spirit and soul are when yours join mine
I find complete luv in luving you
feeling your words as if you're here beside me
seeing our future thru my dreams
knowing one day you and I will be together
without your sweet luv life would be unlivable
dreams would be of a luv less future
passion chained within a darkened soul
let me be to you as you are to me
shining light of hope and comfort
fresh breath of life I inhale thru you
my sweet luv I need you to feel me
to know the sacredness that we are
let my spirit flow thru yours as you dream
our destinies are easy to see
luving each other beyond realms of spirituality
one day holding each other sacredly in the flesh
close your eyes.......
dream my sweet luv
let our spirits embrace
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
your words smiled at me so sweetly
as they still do after all this time
you hugged this shattered to pieces heart
bleeding with sadness of memories
from a haunted luver licking it's tears
instead of staring thru the teardrops
you embraced them with luving kisses
moved thru my heart with your soft voice
how soothing.....calm.....peaceful
my spirit and soul are when yours join mine
I find complete luv in luving you
feeling your words as if you're here beside me
seeing our future thru my dreams
knowing one day you and I will be together
without your sweet luv life would be unlivable
dreams would be of a luv less future
passion chained within a darkened soul
let me be to you as you are to me
shining light of hope and comfort
fresh breath of life I inhale thru you
my sweet luv I need you to feel me
to know the sacredness that we are
let my spirit flow thru yours as you dream
our destinies are easy to see
luving each other beyond realms of spirituality
one day holding each other sacredly in the flesh
close your eyes.......
dream my sweet luv
let our spirits embrace
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Dream My Luv
31st Mar 2016 11:36pm
Re: Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 1:03am
HI FB.......glad you stopped by my page.......thank you for the smile you've brought with your words......I've read your brilliant write amd left words for you.....well done......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
Anonymous
1st Apr 2016 00:40am
This is one lucky guy!
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 1:05am
Awe....thank you SG.....always luv your smile upon my ink......glad you're back.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 1:33am
Re: Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 1:45am
Hey JJ.......just the emotion I wanted to my ink to be felt like........you've made me so smile.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 3:52am
Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 2:29am
let me be to you as you are to me
shining light of hope and comfort
fresh breath of life I inhale thru you
my sweet luv I need you to feel me
to know the sacredness that we are
let my spirit flow thru yours as you dream
"our destinies are easy to see
luving each other beyond realms of spirituality
one day holding each other sacredly in the flesh
close your eyes.......
dream my sweet luv
let our spirits embrace"
a beautiful dream like that who wants to wake up... loved this ink! *hugs* :D
shining light of hope and comfort
fresh breath of life I inhale thru you
my sweet luv I need you to feel me
to know the sacredness that we are
let my spirit flow thru yours as you dream
"our destinies are easy to see
luving each other beyond realms of spirituality
one day holding each other sacredly in the flesh
close your eyes.......
dream my sweet luv
let our spirits embrace"
a beautiful dream like that who wants to wake up... loved this ink! *hugs* :D
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
4th Apr 2016 2:40am
Thank you Magic.......you always honor me with your words and smile upon my ink.......glad our paths crossed here.......purple luv & hugs your way......xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 3:24am
Re: Re. Dream My Luv
4th Apr 2016 2:45am
Hey Kavil.....you're amazing to me......thank you my sacred friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 7:06am
A special tribute to that special someone flower girl...i enjoyed the read
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
4th Apr 2016 2:46am
Hi Kate....so very honored to see your smile upon my page.......he is special indeed......im thrilled you enjoyed my ink......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
4th Apr 2016 2:55am
Sweet S......you've brought tears to me with your words.......He moves me.....inspires passion deep within me......I'm so very fortunate to experience this luv......thank you for your precious words and always sweet smile you leave me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
1st Apr 2016 10:53pm
Oh My, Oh My.....yessss, yes I see the dream.....Lovely Share.....thank you, really felt.....ONE
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
4th Apr 2016 3:01am
Hi 2b2b2......honored by your visit to my page......I'm glad you felt this.....thank you for sharing thoughts with me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
2nd Apr 2016 4:43am
This seems like such an intense longing. A beautiful piece, flower!
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"our destinies are easy to see
luving each other beyond realms of spirituality
one day holding each other sacredly in the flesh"
^^^^^^^^^ I really love this stanza.... xo
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"our destinies are easy to see
luving each other beyond realms of spirituality
one day holding each other sacredly in the flesh"
^^^^^^^^^ I really love this stanza.... xo
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
4th Apr 2016 3:14am
Precious Rain.......I'm so happy you enjoyed this one.......sometimes our dreams are what sees us thru......leaves hope within our hearts and souls......thank you for your sweet words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
2nd Apr 2016 4:01pm
I suppose I would call this a proper love poem - there are so many out there that try to be love poems but dont make it - this one definitely does :-)
Excellent Ink :-)
Excellent Ink :-)
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
4th Apr 2016 3:23am
Hey David......I'm very honored by your words.......I'm happy I succeeded in my goal with this one......you're words and smile always make me feel happy.....thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
5th Apr 2016 5:16pm
you have established your self
on a purple flower bed
I am still laying flat
holding my bat
no one balls at me as freely
but your poetry is still flowery
I don't bat an eye
while reading ye
you are the only purple one
outside Royalty
on a purple flower bed
I am still laying flat
holding my bat
no one balls at me as freely
but your poetry is still flowery
I don't bat an eye
while reading ye
you are the only purple one
outside Royalty
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
6th Apr 2016 00:34am
Thank tou Again for your poetic response.......glad you liked this one......purple is my trademark......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Dream My Luv
7th Apr 2016 2:10am
Ahhh, flowergirl, luv ~ :-*
This is so achingly precious and lovely I've not words enough to convey how I feel reading it.
Know this, though, I am happy you are so blessed for you are such a kind and compassionate soul, joy should accompany your days, luv... :-*
This is so achingly precious and lovely I've not words enough to convey how I feel reading it.
Know this, though, I am happy you are so blessed for you are such a kind and compassionate soul, joy should accompany your days, luv... :-*
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Re: Re. Dream My Luv
8th Apr 2016 1:24am
HI Savaja......thrilled that my words have touched you so.......a wish every writer has to have there words touch another's heart.......thank you for sharing your kind thoughts with me......you're words truly touch me back......purple luv & hugs xo :)