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Spiritual Caress
walking by the river
our favorite intimate place
memories luvingly hugging me
wind whispering your first sweet "Hello!"
laying among fragrant blooms of luv
looking up at a beautiful sky
lonely tears ran down my cheek
emotions began to swirl within me
closed my eyes and there you were
that beautiful magical smile
felt it flow thru my heart
feeling the warmth of you
light soft touch as if of a feather
softly glided across my skin
so sweetly for a second I held my breath
as you spiritually caressed me
I realized you're not so far away
cause you're right here within my soul
spiritually feeling your luv
from wherever you might be
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
our favorite intimate place
memories luvingly hugging me
wind whispering your first sweet "Hello!"
laying among fragrant blooms of luv
looking up at a beautiful sky
lonely tears ran down my cheek
emotions began to swirl within me
closed my eyes and there you were
that beautiful magical smile
felt it flow thru my heart
feeling the warmth of you
light soft touch as if of a feather
softly glided across my skin
so sweetly for a second I held my breath
as you spiritually caressed me
I realized you're not so far away
cause you're right here within my soul
spiritually feeling your luv
from wherever you might be
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re: Re. Spiritual Caress
8th Apr 2016 5:44am
My precious devoted friend......that is one thing I never doubt in my life......thank you.....good night.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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8th Apr 2016 9:47am
G, this is beautiful but heartbreaking, loving and breath taking. Though I know not who you wrote this for, I have known such deep loss and wondrous recollections for loved ones passed into Heaven. Warmest {{{{hugs}}}} to you wrapped in purple love!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Spiritual Caress
8th Apr 2016 10:36am
Whoa JJ......didn't realize I wrote this as speaking about death......wrote it for a soul on another site that I miss very much cause he's away but not in death.......thank you for bringing a different meaning to this......I can see how it can be taken that way.......great insight that I didn't see......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Spiritual Caress
8th Apr 2016 10:47am
Yea, it just goes to show that art is in the eye of the beholder. Still a wonderful poem...
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Spiritual Caress
8th Apr 2016 10:51am
Thank you JJ for sharing thoughts with me.......luv it when I get a different view on my write than what I saw or felt in it....broadens the imagination.......appreciate you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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I missed the death part also, flower, could be that,
as J.J. said, it is the eye of the beholder. I took the
poem to mean you had a long-distance lover. Lucky
guy. Have a feeling I am right in that.
as J.J. said, it is the eye of the beholder. I took the
poem to mean you had a long-distance lover. Lucky
guy. Have a feeling I am right in that.
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9th Apr 2016 4:10am
Hi SG.........I think this is great.......I luv writes that have more than one side.....interesting to see how others see it.......I honestly didn't think about the side that JJ said.....now that I read it though......I can see it.......yes you're right on your take of this......appreciate your kind words......I think I'm the fortunate one......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Spiritual Caress
8th Apr 2016 8:10pm
You did not intend it to, but that could be a memory of someone now dead, the accompanying pic shows a tear trickling from the girl's eye.
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Re: Re. Spiritual Caress
9th Apr 2016 4:12am
Hey Solomon......you're right......now that I read with that in mind......it sure could be......thank you for your thoughts......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Spiritual Caress
9th Apr 2016 3:55am
...spiritual connections are the best to have. Beautiful thoughts released, pprincess.....xo
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9th Apr 2016 4:13am
Hi Sexy Rain......it's the best connection for the heart and soul.......feels wonderful for sure......appreciate you sharing the feeling.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Spiritual Caress
9th Apr 2016 4:55am
Flower, this was a gentle and
tender write. You are so true
that the ones whom we love
are never really that far away.
Pleasant scribe... Dantalion
tender write. You are so true
that the ones whom we love
are never really that far away.
Pleasant scribe... Dantalion
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10th Apr 2016 2:27am
Hi Pan......they're only a thought away.......thank you for bringing a smile upon my page......always a blessing to see you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Spiritual Caress
9th Apr 2016 6:39pm
Your soul's a beautiful place to be Flower. You're so sweet and refreshing Flower, just the writer to wake up to on a rainy morning. This one makes my day!
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10th Apr 2016 2:31am
Hey Crow......you always refresh my smile......glad i could make your cozy rainy day a bit warmer.......luv a nice slow warm rain......it's like a million kisses upon your heart from the one your thinking of......appreciate you much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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10th Apr 2016 00:12am
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10th Apr 2016 2:33am
Awe David.......you always say comforting words......sigh......thank you so very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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10th Apr 2016 7:57am
Beautiful Sun Kissed, I have got to remember to comment at the very same time as I read because then this happens....I think I did and then see that I didn't with my thoughts remaining stuck in my head.....regardless distance you can always show that love holds no boundaries...stunning write my dear...With love - Sweet S xo :)
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10th Apr 2016 4:52pm
Sweet S.......I appreciate you reading and taking time for leaving me words of luv......your thoughts are perfect......luv has no boundaries or limits.......thank you my friend for bringing your sweet smile upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)