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your iris
to lavish in your petals so
and come so near as to inspect
your dewy sheen, your silken glow,
another stem should come erect
Published 5th Apr 2016
| Edited 7th Apr 2016
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13th Apr 2016 4:33pm
Anonymous
5th Apr 2016 10:06pm
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13th Apr 2016 4:35pm
Thank you for the comment... Sorry this took so long, craziness on this side... Looking at the Bearded Iris in my yard... Made me think of other things...
geoff
geoff
6th Apr 2016 00:03am
Oh wow this is uniquely
tasteful and stimulating.
How lovely absorbed
my Hep! So, beautiful it's
as if you painting all the
intricate detail of a woman's
heaven. In few words.
Too beautiful
-Howlings
tasteful and stimulating.
How lovely absorbed
my Hep! So, beautiful it's
as if you painting all the
intricate detail of a woman's
heaven. In few words.
Too beautiful
-Howlings
13th Apr 2016 4:39pm
Thank you, Howlings...
Sorry for my delay, but I deeply appreciate your comment... For woman's heaven is my heaven is my heaven as well and being so close to that which looks like heaven... I had to note...
geoff
Sorry for my delay, but I deeply appreciate your comment... For woman's heaven is my heaven is my heaven as well and being so close to that which looks like heaven... I had to note...
geoff
7th Apr 2016 7:35am
13th Apr 2016 4:42pm
Thank you,
Apologies for the delay - crazy life...
As the flower implied subtly another, so I was graced with words to do likewise...
;-)
geoff
Apologies for the delay - crazy life...
As the flower implied subtly another, so I was graced with words to do likewise...
;-)
geoff
7th Apr 2016 3:18pm
mmm....beautiful, subtle and simply sexy - love this!
(but forgive my neurotic eye, I can't ignore spelling - petals)
;)
lovely write, geoff!
(but forgive my neurotic eye, I can't ignore spelling - petals)
;)
lovely write, geoff!
13th Apr 2016 4:45pm
Kelly sorry for the delay... I can always use a good proof reader ;-)...
I really appreciate your commitment, the flower reminded me of my love for the "floral" so I wrote about it...
:-)
geoff
I really appreciate your commitment, the flower reminded me of my love for the "floral" so I wrote about it...
:-)
geoff
