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Fade to Light
seductively, sequins gild my tip
atop one of the tiered thrones
swabbed and quenched by a streakend lip
fluttering forming cyclones
another reality, shrouded by a screen
projected by lights performing a script
swim around us in the mildest aquamarine
onto the seats where powdered blues drip
an abductee, I’m snared on the spiderweb
of bleached hues from their theatre
slanted eyes and light of head
I can’t drink in the view but hear the slurp
of sensuality, as lines are replaced
by captions of my expletives
leading my hand with her hair encased
to linger where it’s extra sensitive
slowly, so softly, sliding down in spirals
steering side licks
vibrations become viral
tremors swell to seismic
oh I wish this could be, a moment forged forever
the pressure pulsates through my pipe
still she remains tethered
till the beam of the usher’s blinding light...
atop one of the tiered thrones
swabbed and quenched by a streakend lip
fluttering forming cyclones
another reality, shrouded by a screen
projected by lights performing a script
swim around us in the mildest aquamarine
onto the seats where powdered blues drip
an abductee, I’m snared on the spiderweb
of bleached hues from their theatre
slanted eyes and light of head
I can’t drink in the view but hear the slurp
of sensuality, as lines are replaced
by captions of my expletives
leading my hand with her hair encased
to linger where it’s extra sensitive
slowly, so softly, sliding down in spirals
steering side licks
vibrations become viral
tremors swell to seismic
oh I wish this could be, a moment forged forever
the pressure pulsates through my pipe
still she remains tethered
till the beam of the usher’s blinding light...
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Re. Fade to Light
28th Mar 2016 8:52pm
Again, there's a lot of imagery packed into this poem, a lot of "s" sounds..makes more sensual, brings the reader in...each stanza have me pause, contemplated the moment of what was happening...could feel the poem...dense but tangible...nice work.
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Re: Re. Fade to Light
29th Mar 2016 9:54pm
yeah, "s" sounds do make it sound sensual huh? lol, your comments inebriate me Whispell, thanx...
Re. Fade to Light
28th Mar 2016 10:22pm
Theatre love: Transporting movie-goers since 1905.
This is wonderfully done, Dean. Not only have you provided imagery that lends to the location, you've conveyed the dreamlike state of the mind when suspended between the two places of reality and sensuality.
This is wonderfully done, Dean. Not only have you provided imagery that lends to the location, you've conveyed the dreamlike state of the mind when suspended between the two places of reality and sensuality.
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29th Mar 2016 9:58pm
"Theatre love: Transporting movie-goers since 1905." ha ha HA! so you're a poet and copywriter lol, between reality and sensuality is a beautiful place too, thanx Vati your comments are moonshine...
Re. Fade to Light
29th Mar 2016 6:58am
how does one follow a comment by miss vati {?} ltm
i shall try anyway...
*
this had me smirking into my morning coffee, dean. honest to goodness, you nailed those opening lines with sure, sensual, subtle imagery & followed through without letting this descend into the smut-mire ...
“I can’t drink in the view but hear the slurp
of sensuality, as lines are replaced
by captions of my expletives
leading my hand with her hair encased
to linger where it’s extra sensitive
slowly, so softly, sliding down in spirals
steering side licks”
...
^^^^^^
*sigh & ohhh*
breathtaking poetry
consider me a fan
xo
i shall try anyway...
*
this had me smirking into my morning coffee, dean. honest to goodness, you nailed those opening lines with sure, sensual, subtle imagery & followed through without letting this descend into the smut-mire ...
“I can’t drink in the view but hear the slurp
of sensuality, as lines are replaced
by captions of my expletives
leading my hand with her hair encased
to linger where it’s extra sensitive
slowly, so softly, sliding down in spirals
steering side licks”
...
^^^^^^
*sigh & ohhh*
breathtaking poetry
consider me a fan
xo
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Re: Re. Fade to Light
29th Mar 2016 10:02pm
im just trying to keep up with these brilliant poets such as your self shadoe, your comments are effective as opium, thanx...
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You do know how to bring a certain amount of warmth to a body. This was so sensual and gorgeously written Dean!
Sign me up to fade to light.....
Sign me up to fade to light.....
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Re: Re. Fade to Light
29th Mar 2016 10:07pm
hey Rain... gotta stay warm, we have bad winters up here, thanx for the potent comments...
ps- ill be bringing the application around this evening,lol...
ps- ill be bringing the application around this evening,lol...
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Re: Re. Fade to Light
29th Mar 2016 10:11pm
thank you my good sir! ill be visiting your neck of poetic woods in a few, dont be a stranger now, your comments swirl my mind, thanx...
Re. Fade to Light
30th Mar 2016 5:48am
I love the ripples of your words.
you tame them in your palms,
such a rarity and often unseen.
Loving the appeal of this one
well. Savoring and refreshing.
-Howlings
you tame them in your palms,
such a rarity and often unseen.
Loving the appeal of this one
well. Savoring and refreshing.
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Fade to Light
30th Mar 2016 8:19pm
thanx, your comments make me a puddle in your hand, i just read "ashes and glyphs" you have such a elegant way with words, ill be back to read more...
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31st Mar 2016 1:22am
Re. Fade to Light
30th Mar 2016 9:13pm
Ahhh, DeanD, luv ~ :-*
This is a phenomenal creation. Clearly, I have been missing a great deal and shall have to rectify that anon.
Your sheer skill in artisanship here is incomparable, luv. What elegance of language you utilize conveying so deftly shivery, seductive, sensory sweetness.
You have a master's touch, luv... :-*
This is a phenomenal creation. Clearly, I have been missing a great deal and shall have to rectify that anon.
Your sheer skill in artisanship here is incomparable, luv. What elegance of language you utilize conveying so deftly shivery, seductive, sensory sweetness.
You have a master's touch, luv... :-*
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31st Mar 2016 5:16am
yeah it's so many artists that I haven't had a chance to check out yet, i'll be over to dig through you poetic chest in a few, your comments spill like ointment over my spirit, thanx Vaja...