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Simultaneous
As I lie here naked
thinking of you
Remembering Time
with you In
Moments
Suspended
my mouth
on you
You hard
me drenched
The both of us moaning: you things I no longer remember (whether words or inarticulations) if ever I knew and I, incomprehensible, mouth filled with bliss of you…
As we reminisce, my body remembers
Tautens
Tightens
Clenches inside
Remembering
the feel of you
taste of you
elegant shape of you
weighting
my mouth
And
the ecstasy of what is so rare
yet oft-sought
Gift we were given by the universe that night
Simultaneous...
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27th Mar 2016 7:19pm
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Re. Simultaneous
27th Mar 2016 8:53pm
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27th Mar 2016 10:38pm
Sublime. You take me into a sensual memory of sacred beauty sustained and beautiful. Truly a wonder to behold.
John
John
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27th Mar 2016 11:22pm
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28th Mar 2016 7:21am
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29th Mar 2016 1:19am
Ahh, what sensual recollection and sultry recount. Beautifully done, lovely. <3
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29th Mar 2016 4:01am
Oooh la la...savaja you have outdone yourself..this is dripping with yummmm...
Love always sweet beauty
Jennifer
Love always sweet beauty
Jennifer
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29th Mar 2016 4:04am
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29th Mar 2016 7:14am
well now, oracle mine, heart palpitations & lower still... you move through this piece like the curve of arched back {&} inviting hips
*sigh*
you write a beautiful glow
xoxox
*sigh*
you write a beautiful glow
xoxox
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29th Mar 2016 8:25am
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30th Mar 2016 00:52am
ima say something do mm uh damn...can't think wow! you could not be more seductive if you were standing naked by candlelight...& that is a compliment :)
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31st Mar 2016 7:49am
Very beautiful and welcoming
darling.
And you know ..and you know
-exhalations-
-Howlings
darling.
And you know ..and you know
-exhalations-
-Howlings
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31st Mar 2016 9:38pm
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1st Apr 2016 3:30am
Deliciously sensual! Passion shared in harmony, expressed in simultaneous roars of applause... even my imagination is overwhelmed by the thought of your tongue travelling through time and space, across my universe...
JJ
JJ
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29th Aug 2016 7:33am
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