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typed out a message trying
to explain what I was really like,
but you said you didn't get it.
I said yeah that'll be the one...
Published 26th Mar 2016
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26th Mar 2016 2:21am
(LOL) women sometimes just don't get it, mainly because we are from Mars and they are from Venus :-)
another very clever and funny write :-)
another very clever and funny write :-)
27th Mar 2016 11:13pm
26th Mar 2016 3:08am
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27th Mar 2016 1:43pm
LOL! Perfect, Paul! Although, the undercurrent of ironic sadness is very prevalent.
27th Mar 2016 11:16pm
just as long as it's only
an undercurrent, I wouldn't
want to drown in the stuff..:)
an undercurrent, I wouldn't
want to drown in the stuff..:)
28th Mar 2016 11:12pm
this is one of those rare poems I wish I had written....describes me to a T....great write
28th Mar 2016 11:31pm
poems are a little
like letters,
they're as much the readers'
as they are the
begetters...
