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its not like it's life or death...
so it disappears, I simply press the
wrong thing and the screen goes blank, and whether
or not it's still out there somewhere
or whether or not it's gone for good,
I don't know, but it seems like a pretty fair
metaphor for something or other...
Published 27th Mar 2016
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27th Mar 2016 4:58am
27th Mar 2016 11:18pm
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27th Mar 2016 11:20pm
27th Mar 2016 5:24am
27th Mar 2016 11:21pm
27th Mar 2016 10:30am
You might be missing the beauty of our transience... it's like the last mouthful of the best meal you ever had.
27th Mar 2016 11:22pm
27th Mar 2016 12:32pm
Jesus it's a metaphor for my entire LIFE Paul! Getting your poem tattooed on my chest!
27th Mar 2016 11:23pm
27th Mar 2016 1:39pm
You see everything, Paul. And I love that about you. Happy Easter, my friend! May your day be peaceful and blessed!
27th Mar 2016 11:26pm
well I hope you're having
a lovely Easter yourself...
I'm afraid I see very little,
so thank goodness for
the big stuff..:)
a lovely Easter yourself...
I'm afraid I see very little,
so thank goodness for
the big stuff..:)
27th Mar 2016 4:17pm
Ahhhh......' P r e s ' tidigitation...at its best...or worse??
So surely crossed over into that void of cyber space!! Gone.....but not forgotten........( R.I.P.)
So surely crossed over into that void of cyber space!! Gone.....but not forgotten........( R.I.P.)
27th Mar 2016 11:28pm
27th Mar 2016 6:37pm
made me think of "There is no spoon" from the Matrix :-)
Your stuff always makes me think :-)
Your stuff always makes me think :-)
27th Mar 2016 11:29pm
28th Mar 2016 10:31pm
I used to think the same thing when i put a letter in that little slot at the post office....
28th Mar 2016 11:23pm
me, too. sometimes you'd hear
it flop as it fell and lay to rest, but
you couldn't tell whether or
not it was still breathing...
it flop as it fell and lay to rest, but
you couldn't tell whether or
not it was still breathing...
