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Star dust
To the star dust of my dreams
I dedicate these expressions,
As poor as they are, as
Reflections of the midnight smile.
How is it that your love
Has lit up my night sky so?
You have become my brightness.
Your moonlight visions revel in my heart
You stand apart as the apex
Of my thoughts, and in my midnight hour
Your beauty blooms as the moon flower
Of my mind; the star dust of my dreams.
And once again I find myself drifting;
Caught in the undertow of comets
Pulled by my desire for your love
To places between moon and tide
Where I gather you as
the star dust of my dreams.
I dedicate these expressions,
As poor as they are, as
Reflections of the midnight smile.
How is it that your love
Has lit up my night sky so?
You have become my brightness.
Your moonlight visions revel in my heart
You stand apart as the apex
Of my thoughts, and in my midnight hour
Your beauty blooms as the moon flower
Of my mind; the star dust of my dreams.
And once again I find myself drifting;
Caught in the undertow of comets
Pulled by my desire for your love
To places between moon and tide
Where I gather you as
the star dust of my dreams.
Published 25th Mar 2016
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Oh Ed Head...swoon...
This is so gorgeous...just a delicate delicate stroke...
You stand apart as the apex
Of my thoughts, and in my midnight hour
Your beauty blooms as the moon flower
Of my mind; the star dust of my dreams.
That is a stunner verse....all of them are. I can be turned off by mushy...maybe embarrased by it...idk...but this didnt have that feel at all. It was well done and obviously from the heart. And the comets...think thats where the star dust worked for me just right. Have heard it before but you made it work and your own..mmm just the whole thing...so nice.
Love
Jen
This is so gorgeous...just a delicate delicate stroke...
You stand apart as the apex
Of my thoughts, and in my midnight hour
Your beauty blooms as the moon flower
Of my mind; the star dust of my dreams.
That is a stunner verse....all of them are. I can be turned off by mushy...maybe embarrased by it...idk...but this didnt have that feel at all. It was well done and obviously from the heart. And the comets...think thats where the star dust worked for me just right. Have heard it before but you made it work and your own..mmm just the whole thing...so nice.
Love
Jen
25th Mar 2016 8:38pm
Thankyou, jen, for your kindness. Especially your specific comments: I really appreciate those. Hugz!!
27th Mar 2016 00:37am
This is very dear, Ed, and here, especially its last line in this stanza:
And once again I find myself drifting;
Caught in the undertow of comets
Pulled by my desire for your love
To places between moon and tide
And once again I find myself drifting;
Caught in the undertow of comets
Pulled by my desire for your love
To places between moon and tide
27th Mar 2016 9:39pm
