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Desideratum
A feeling arising in my neck,
wandering down my spine,
intensifying at my loins
and my dignity's finally about to wreck
when tingling's to be sensed further down
Not just making my skin longing for touch
but also wanting to have a firm clutch
A desire for exploring, pleasing
so much, it should be beyond my power,
ecstasy, possession, teasing
Being aware of the naughtiness,
your pleasure being my delight,
then hoping for affactionateness
since it will satisfy me quite
still to be held tight
wandering down my spine,
intensifying at my loins
and my dignity's finally about to wreck
when tingling's to be sensed further down
Not just making my skin longing for touch
but also wanting to have a firm clutch
A desire for exploring, pleasing
so much, it should be beyond my power,
ecstasy, possession, teasing
Being aware of the naughtiness,
your pleasure being my delight,
then hoping for affactionateness
since it will satisfy me quite
still to be held tight
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Re. Desideratum
18th Mar 2016 7:53pm
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19th Mar 2016 00:19am
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19th Mar 2016 7:17pm
the first stirrings of sexuality, told in mature poetics.
in the 3rd line of the last stanza, you might want to use 'affection,' for a smoother flow...
in the 3rd line of the last stanza, you might want to use 'affection,' for a smoother flow...
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Re. Desideratum
8th Oct 2016 11:23am
This is actually pretty sweet...yea sex is implied but it's mostly a really sweet piece. :)
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7th Sep 2018 1:16pm
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24th Apr 2019 8:51pm
Re. Desideratum
12th Jul 2019 7:53pm
It may be your very first poem however you show a real talent, this showing desire passion and even being naughty and the tender side, lovely words.
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