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That sweet factories in Shanghai
Made the clouds
Soaking pink garlands in Mumbai
And sweating crowds
That brought rains to a cold Dubai
And wrought a London goodbye
That fell like tears
Down lines of sorrow
Drowned lines of a poem writ
Ley Lines by Wayland Smith
Laying where our love forged us
In tempest and in spit
From your hollow lungs
And the bellows of our songs
Now slow the waltz
Now the shutters close
Now lay us alone
Made the clouds
Soaking pink garlands in Mumbai
And sweating crowds
That brought rains to a cold Dubai
And wrought a London goodbye
That fell like tears
Down lines of sorrow
Drowned lines of a poem writ
Ley Lines by Wayland Smith
Laying where our love forged us
In tempest and in spit
From your hollow lungs
And the bellows of our songs
Now slow the waltz
Now the shutters close
Now lay us alone
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18th Mar 2016 12:14pm
Re. LAY
18th Mar 2016 10:20pm
Beautiful travel log and memories, Whale.
The pain of separation weighs heavy as a downpour
on leaves. And yet they're sustained.
The world is your commuter plane
revealing beauty along the way;
and Love the home you yearn
to be a final destination.
The pain of separation weighs heavy as a downpour
on leaves. And yet they're sustained.
The world is your commuter plane
revealing beauty along the way;
and Love the home you yearn
to be a final destination.
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19th Mar 2016 3:36pm
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19th Mar 2016 5:02pm
Re. LAY
19th Mar 2016 6:05am
Loved how you formed this poem whale and thank you for bringing Wayland Smithy to the forefront of my mind ... a very special place it is ... :)
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19th Mar 2016 3:38pm
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19th Mar 2016 8:46am
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19th Mar 2016 3:39pm
Re. LAY
21st Mar 2016 4:19pm
You send me chills
.. .send me an outpour of them
oh.. oh the currents do doth ache
underneath takes one into depths
of sorrow, death and happiness
and pleasure.. . their fragrances
are significant ..are strong..
strengthening
J'adore, j'adore whale.
-Howlings
.. .send me an outpour of them
oh.. oh the currents do doth ache
underneath takes one into depths
of sorrow, death and happiness
and pleasure.. . their fragrances
are significant ..are strong..
strengthening
J'adore, j'adore whale.
-Howlings
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23rd Mar 2016 7:38am
From a butterfly wing in Beijing great storms can brew that can engulf our worlds
Thank you
Thank you
Re. LAY
24th Mar 2016 5:55am
memories of exotic places that sail like paper airplanes to serenity,
& so we lay down gently...
& so we lay down gently...
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24th Mar 2016 6:50am
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29th Mar 2016 7:57am
I really love what Ahavati said! It really fits what my mind and mouth wanted to say but couldn't. This was wonderfully designed ink! Love it Whales! :)
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