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cruel is my kiss
it comes to this, at times. it comes to an overwhelming
passion that compels me to voice my terrible dreams.
when I destroy the fragile odes of poets who think they
know what love is.
love is a beast with ferrous hands that grabs you by the
shoulders & tosses you onto the stark white sheets of
the bed. it holds you by the hair & drives its fiery tongue
deeply into your wanton mouth. it torments your neck
with the sucked-red marks that are badges of your shame.
it grips your trembling tits with the steel of madness, to
bite your hard nipples like it was pulling the pin out of a
grenade with its teeth. every inch of your naked flesh
craves this; this desire that proclaims you a woman.
when it impales you & storms to a cresting sunburst, you
will discover the raging cauldron of your emotions! then
it orders you: ‘cry for me. cry for me baby!’ & you cry, & the
fireball of my orgasm shoots right through the sky!
and you accept this beautiful agony,
knowing you are the woman. the only woman.
– the only Woman –
I do not love you to fuck you
I fuck you to love you.
I know you. I know you like to be fucked like a whore.
sometimes you are just a cunt that needs a mean,
burning hot cock…
(Art: Edwin Hesser)
Published 7th Mar 2016
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7th Mar 2016 8:28pm
7th Mar 2016 9:16pm
'I do not love you to fuck you
I fuck you to love you.'
Yes, very much yes; though a point I have often found difficult to get across...
I fuck you to love you.'
Yes, very much yes; though a point I have often found difficult to get across...
7th Mar 2016 10:04pm
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7th Mar 2016 10:14pm
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7th Mar 2016 10:49pm
You got me all fired up with this one John!
Brilliant write! Really enjoyed! 😊
Brilliant write! Really enjoyed! 😊
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7th Mar 2016 11:15pm
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8th Mar 2016 00:53am
the imagery with so many "masterful" lines ... a brilliant write JohnFeddeler ...
8th Mar 2016 1:17am
"For even as love crowns you so shall he crucify you. Even as he is for your growth so is he for your pruning.
Even as he ascends to your height and caresses your tenderest branches that quiver in the sun,
So shall he descend to your roots and shake them in their clinging to the earth."
Laugh all your laughter, John. Well written and deserved.
Even as he ascends to your height and caresses your tenderest branches that quiver in the sun,
So shall he descend to your roots and shake them in their clinging to the earth."
Laugh all your laughter, John. Well written and deserved.
8th Mar 2016 4:54am
"it grips your trembling tits with the steel of madness, to
bite your hard nipples like it was pulling the pin out of a
grenade with its teeth. every inch of your naked flesh
craves this; this desire that proclaims you a woman."<--- well, shattt! That perked my nipples up....o_O
John, John, John! Pen Salute~ my gesture of homage to your ink....
bite your hard nipples like it was pulling the pin out of a
grenade with its teeth. every inch of your naked flesh
craves this; this desire that proclaims you a woman."<--- well, shattt! That perked my nipples up....o_O
John, John, John! Pen Salute~ my gesture of homage to your ink....
8th Mar 2016 5:31am
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8th Mar 2016 4:52pm
8th Mar 2016 8:04pm
Man you captured that side of love both ugly and beautiful rolled into one. I love the points you were making in this write, and people who are in love tend to explore these reasonings as they journey through life. Awesome write John.
9th Mar 2016 11:18am
You encapsulated the joys of a good, old fashioned knock-down drag out fuck fight. The type of fight everybody wins! Wow mate this is a hot write.
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9th Mar 2016 8:55pm
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10th Mar 2016 00:06am
Your words John have a strong ring of truth ... for the woman who loves the man no matter what and for the man who's too afraid to love because he doesn't want to be hurt ....
Ahavati's quote from Khalil Gibran's The Prophet is a timely reminder that love is not sweet and sugary ....
Ahavati's quote from Khalil Gibran's The Prophet is a timely reminder that love is not sweet and sugary ....
10th Mar 2016 4:58am
Feddler darling.. . sh;;...
you are just.. . when you let
yourself go.. letting all feel
your impulses..
Holymotherthrobbings..
-Howlings
you are just.. . when you let
yourself go.. letting all feel
your impulses..
Holymotherthrobbings..
-Howlings
12th Mar 2016 6:17am
Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
You have so perfectly divined what is, betimes, undeniable, irrevocable, nigh insatiate Need...
You are a poetic force. ;-*
You have so perfectly divined what is, betimes, undeniable, irrevocable, nigh insatiate Need...
You are a poetic force. ;-*
14th Mar 2016 4:01am
14th Mar 2016 1:33pm
The comparisons between art and rape and torture are striking. Thank you for the read.
22nd Mar 2016 4:38am
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