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The Four Elements in Me
©ThornWithin
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(Poem inspired by the four elements and its role in my being. Written for the poetry competition titled Elements, submitted this 3rd day of March 2016 @dup.)
Diligence is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humility is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Kindness is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Temperance is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
Improving skill is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humbling myself is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Caring soul is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Abstaining from vices is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
Persistence is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Modesty is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Compassion is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Abstinence is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
All Rights Reserved 2016
(Poem inspired by the four elements and its role in my being. Written for the poetry competition titled Elements, submitted this 3rd day of March 2016 @dup.)
Diligence is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humility is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Kindness is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Temperance is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
Improving skill is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humbling myself is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Caring soul is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Abstaining from vices is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
Persistence is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Modesty is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Compassion is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Abstinence is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
Published 3rd Mar 2016
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3rd Mar 2016 6:04am
Thank you Wally for your appreciation and for your overwhelming critique. I'm touched that a very prolific poet like you enjoyed reading my work and even commented.
Have a blessed day always, Wally !
Paul
Have a blessed day always, Wally !
Paul
7th Mar 2016 10:48pm
24th Mar 2016 4:41am
30th Mar 2016 2:54pm
So you have fire and water within...how very malleable! An extremely nice read...thanks for your contribution!
