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Dr. Dosomething
For too long I've done too little
The time for healing has begun
If I could talk to the animals
I would apologize for all that humans have done
And if my hands could heal the world
I would cleanse the air and wash the water
I would enrich the soil with the silver of my bones
To restore and repay in reparations nature can swallow
For she is choking on so much that's been shoved down her throat
Forced to fellate mankind in the most unkind way
So deeply from behind it came out of her mouth
She tried to spit it out but the virus silenced her song
Still the animals understood her gurgling cry
And they roared in anguish and screeched in pain
As the abomination she gave birth to was dubbed humanity
Oh the humanity that savagely raped nature until she died
And no matter how he tried, the good doctor could do little
The air was left unbreathable and water not even Carp could drink
Every animal died and only the virus of man survived... on Mars
The time for healing has begun
If I could talk to the animals
I would apologize for all that humans have done
And if my hands could heal the world
I would cleanse the air and wash the water
I would enrich the soil with the silver of my bones
To restore and repay in reparations nature can swallow
For she is choking on so much that's been shoved down her throat
Forced to fellate mankind in the most unkind way
So deeply from behind it came out of her mouth
She tried to spit it out but the virus silenced her song
Still the animals understood her gurgling cry
And they roared in anguish and screeched in pain
As the abomination she gave birth to was dubbed humanity
Oh the humanity that savagely raped nature until she died
And no matter how he tried, the good doctor could do little
The air was left unbreathable and water not even Carp could drink
Every animal died and only the virus of man survived... on Mars
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Re. Dr. Dosomething
Entered in the "Inspiration from" comp in the forums.
JJ
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Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 5:58am
Wouldn’t it be a better world if we all could be Dr. Dosomething? Do something small that could actually impact a life in a large capacity. This is why I love your heart, it’s always trying to reach out and touch in a positive way.
“I would enrich the soul with the silver of my bones
To restore and repay in reparations nature can swallow
For she is choking on so much that's been shoved down her throat
Forced to fellate mankind in the most unkind way” <----gosh, wish I had thought of that! Perfect design of wording!
Good luck in comp sweety!
“I would enrich the soul with the silver of my bones
To restore and repay in reparations nature can swallow
For she is choking on so much that's been shoved down her throat
Forced to fellate mankind in the most unkind way” <----gosh, wish I had thought of that! Perfect design of wording!
Good luck in comp sweety!
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Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 6:27am
All that I know how to do is express what is in my heart. I hope that someday everyone can feel the way I do... so many would rather do nothing or as little as possible. Perhaps Mother Nature will change it for us before it's too late!
Thank you Tara!
jj
Thank you Tara!
jj
Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
1st Mar 2016 4:20am
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Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 7:08am
This is unfortunately the world we live in, we destroy the very place that shelters us. Good job.
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Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 5:37pm
Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 7:25am
"Virus of man" ohhh that's annoyed me lol I've written one describing man as that to...oh well
I reckon Gaia will have her payback, is it not strange that without human kind Earth is a most perfect balanced eco system...only when we act like Gods do we F it up..
I reckon Gaia will have her payback, is it not strange that without human kind Earth is a most perfect balanced eco system...only when we act like Gods do we F it up..
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Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 5:20pm
Thank you Freya! The Earth is a very special speck of space dust that has given birth to billions of life forms. Only one of them has been dumb enough to F it up. It seems impossible that we can be so smart and yet so stupid all at the same time... jj
Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 4:44pm
I fucking love this... I get so frustrated at the condition of the world and the apathy of most people toward it. One person can only do so much... It is little compared to the damage done. Humanity is a destructive species.
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Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
29th Feb 2016 5:14pm
Thank you Kitty, glad you love it! Love that attitude!!! Comment and add are much appreciated!
JJ
JJ
Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
1st Mar 2016 4:19am
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Re. Dr. Dosomething
Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
1st Mar 2016 4:01am
Thank you for the thoughtful comment Wally! the Matrix trilogy is one of my favorite movies...
JJ
JJ
Re. Dr. Dosomething
1st Mar 2016 9:45pm
just reinforced my views on humanities place in the world parasitic by nature in nature, destroying rather than re building as sombody has aready said I too believe that mother nature will have her revenge
excellent work :-)
excellent work :-)
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Re: Re. Dr. Dosomething
2nd Mar 2016 00:11am
Thanks David! Every time I get a comment like this it reinforces my own view to know others feel as I do! JJ