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For The Dandelions
I could be back in Chi-Town
drunk on the red line, but there wasn't much to say
past Monday night, once the poetry was gone.
We both knew this city was never for me.
I came back to you once with nothing
but some bones and a broken heart, and learned
my shoulders weren't big enough
to carry you either.
I was half-way out the moment I stepped back ito your life.
I was always somewhere far away from there
on some moutain the conquistadors forgot about,
dreamin the real realdreams.
It doesn't take much for me to be done with anything,
just because you knew me doesn't mean you knew me,
and all that crap about
"that time..."
or
"that place..."
is conjecture.
There is no line between the truth
and the sincere things I conjure up.
I've been many things, but you only know
what I've told you.
I never really needed any of it
but that was never the point.
drunk on the red line, but there wasn't much to say
past Monday night, once the poetry was gone.
We both knew this city was never for me.
I came back to you once with nothing
but some bones and a broken heart, and learned
my shoulders weren't big enough
to carry you either.
I was half-way out the moment I stepped back ito your life.
I was always somewhere far away from there
on some moutain the conquistadors forgot about,
dreamin the real realdreams.
It doesn't take much for me to be done with anything,
just because you knew me doesn't mean you knew me,
and all that crap about
"that time..."
or
"that place..."
is conjecture.
There is no line between the truth
and the sincere things I conjure up.
I've been many things, but you only know
what I've told you.
I never really needed any of it
but that was never the point.
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Re. For The Dandelions
25th Feb 2016 10:18am
just a pit-stop on the way to.....wherever the poetry went.
sounds like there were no memories to gather
or pieces to pick up...
sounds like there were no memories to gather
or pieces to pick up...
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Re. For The Dandelions
26th Feb 2016 4:30pm
once the poetry was gone.
Worst feeling in the world akin to when the love-making stops. I could live without the latter before the former. As long as there's poetry still flowing there's beauty in the dying. And, I'd rather die beautifully than live empty. This is wonderfully written and totally relatable, Matthew.
Worst feeling in the world akin to when the love-making stops. I could live without the latter before the former. As long as there's poetry still flowing there's beauty in the dying. And, I'd rather die beautifully than live empty. This is wonderfully written and totally relatable, Matthew.
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Re: Re. For The Dandelions
29th Feb 2016 3:48pm
Sometimes it can be a sign that you need to move on, and that can lead you to where you need to be. Thanks for the comment
Re. For The Dandelions
26th Feb 2016 11:04pm
memories.....ever so warped that we swear whatever-it-was equals "truth"
(but anyway always impossible in humanmind)
5star writ
(but anyway always impossible in humanmind)
5star writ
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Re. For The Dandelions
27th Feb 2016 4:47pm
"There is no line between the truth and the sincere things I conjure up"
THE poets epiphany held as tightly as a dandelion picked in the wind
THE poets epiphany held as tightly as a dandelion picked in the wind
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Re: Re. For The Dandelions
29th Feb 2016 3:49pm
thanks for the comment, and we truly are sincere creatures, if not always honest
Re. For The Dandelions
27th Feb 2016 8:47pm
fascinating dreamy poem has a drug infused feel about it to me but then that's just my interpretations - some very strong line really got me thinking creatively :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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Re. For The Dandelions
28th Mar 2016 11:19pm
"It doesn't take much for me to be done with anything,
just because you knew me doesn't mean you knew me,
and all that crap about
"that time..."
or
"that place..."
is conjecture.
There is no line between the truth
and the sincere things I conjure up.
I've been many things, but you only know
what I've told you.
I never really needed any of it
but that was never the point. ".......that is a poem all on it's own....if you dug out an old record player...picked out the scratchy 45 out of the pile marked "ME"...it would sound like this....great write
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