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Can't Run
I've been yearning for you to
Wrap your essence around me
And place
Intricate, Detailed, Slippery
Lips
On mine... Allowing me to slurp, lick and suck every consonant and vowel you utter
So that I may
See (where you're cumming from)
In all aspects not just one
To surely and unequivocally
Make your body come undone
Leaving me simply gratified
To have tasted sheer coated juices
That I crave secretly
Wrap your essence around me
And place
Intricate, Detailed, Slippery
Lips
On mine... Allowing me to slurp, lick and suck every consonant and vowel you utter
So that I may
See (where you're cumming from)
In all aspects not just one
To surely and unequivocally
Make your body come undone
Leaving me simply gratified
To have tasted sheer coated juices
That I crave secretly
Published 16th Feb 2016
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16th Feb 2016 5:03am
Ms Mocha,
Very nice..
Really liked the line
" make your body come undone"
Simple yet stunning...
A great release of sorts.
Keith
Very nice..
Really liked the line
" make your body come undone"
Simple yet stunning...
A great release of sorts.
Keith
16th Feb 2016 12:23pm
Thank you so much Keith,
It is always so good to hear from you. I appreciate your positive energy and feedback more than you know!!
It is always so good to hear from you. I appreciate your positive energy and feedback more than you know!!
16th Feb 2016 12:25pm
Hi Wally,
My gosh!! Thank you so so much. Sometimes theres just no escaping the facts! I more than appreciate the kind compliments😊
My gosh!! Thank you so so much. Sometimes theres just no escaping the facts! I more than appreciate the kind compliments😊
Vivid_mocha, luv ~ :-*
No one exudes sheer, intense passion quite like you. Smoldering, ready to ignite, set us ablaze... ;-*
This poem is scrumptious (almost as much as you are, luv)... ;-*
No one exudes sheer, intense passion quite like you. Smoldering, ready to ignite, set us ablaze... ;-*
This poem is scrumptious (almost as much as you are, luv)... ;-*
16th Feb 2016 12:22pm
Smiling super hard ( Kay my cheeks hurt)
Lovely Savaja,
I'm so appreciative for you reading my piece and leaving such positive feedback. It is always more than a pleasure to have you grace anything. Thank you so much, but it is you that I deem the scrumptious one💋
Ps. And thank you for catching what I looked over lovely
Lovely Savaja,
I'm so appreciative for you reading my piece and leaving such positive feedback. It is always more than a pleasure to have you grace anything. Thank you so much, but it is you that I deem the scrumptious one💋
Ps. And thank you for catching what I looked over lovely
17th Feb 2016 11:25pm
"I've been yearning for you to
Wrap your essence around me
And place
Intricate, Detailed, Slippery
Lips
On mine... Allowing me to slurp, lick and suck every consonant and vowel you utter" <--- gosh, these lines are so dang sensual!
A lovely and sexy read lil' sis... xo
Wrap your essence around me
And place
Intricate, Detailed, Slippery
Lips
On mine... Allowing me to slurp, lick and suck every consonant and vowel you utter" <--- gosh, these lines are so dang sensual!
A lovely and sexy read lil' sis... xo
18th Feb 2016 1:00pm
Beautiful Rain!!
Thank you so much big sis, I'm smiling from ear to ear. I'm super happy you liked this piece and left such a sweet compliment. Sending love and hugs your way🤗😘 thank you again
Thank you so much big sis, I'm smiling from ear to ear. I'm super happy you liked this piece and left such a sweet compliment. Sending love and hugs your way🤗😘 thank you again
23rd Feb 2016 8:53pm
Mmmmm... I concur with the others here, truly a sexy sexy piece! Love
that fearless way of expressing desire! :)
that fearless way of expressing desire! :)
7th Mar 2016 9:45pm
"And place
Intricate, Detailed, Slippery
Lips
On mine... Allowing me to slurp, lick and suck every consonant and vowel you utter
So that I may
See (where you're cumming from)" this piece is delectablely hot mocha... you never lost a flame... happy monday and a blessed week :)
Intricate, Detailed, Slippery
Lips
On mine... Allowing me to slurp, lick and suck every consonant and vowel you utter
So that I may
See (where you're cumming from)" this piece is delectablely hot mocha... you never lost a flame... happy monday and a blessed week :)
