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Wicked nursery rhymes 2
My chains fell off
My heart was free
Amazing Love,
how can it be?
im alive to give
my love to you
You give everything for me
you hold me up
you pull my strings
you help me feel
when i cant see
you build me up
you break me down
but you always keep me
you mead my wounds
you heal my scars
you make the noise
stop and pause
you take my dark
and let it be
letting me be free
you are my love
i have no choice
you pull my stings
you are my voice
you build me up
you break me down
but then you rebuild me
My heart was free
Amazing Love,
how can it be?
im alive to give
my love to you
You give everything for me
you hold me up
you pull my strings
you help me feel
when i cant see
you build me up
you break me down
but you always keep me
you mead my wounds
you heal my scars
you make the noise
stop and pause
you take my dark
and let it be
letting me be free
you are my love
i have no choice
you pull my stings
you are my voice
you build me up
you break me down
but then you rebuild me
Published 14th Feb 2016
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14th Feb 2016 7:36pm
I enjoyed this sinisterpenz.
It had a certain tone to it that
was in a way enchanting and
sounded optimistic.
But overall, it was a great read.
Pan
It had a certain tone to it that
was in a way enchanting and
sounded optimistic.
But overall, it was a great read.
Pan
15th Feb 2016 2:04am
17th Feb 2016 11:33pm
Well I'm a big fan to nursery rhymes and the melody of them.
This reads like a melancholy , love poem.
But I see the melody to it as well. Either way, I think it's a very good write.
Well done ^^
This reads like a melancholy , love poem.
But I see the melody to it as well. Either way, I think it's a very good write.
Well done ^^
18th Feb 2016 7:58pm
