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Bourbon, Bedroom Eye's & Bad Choices
Drifting for awhile in a dingy bar
she twists her body onto a chair
sipping her bourbon from a dirty glass
The stranger in black was the bang
in last night's beat she had another
in mind for the night
Just like that she spotted him, he was
a hidden concoction in suede shoes
with a twisted smile
He stopped in her shadow, he had a
cruel way about him, giving him bed
room eye's she spoke his language
They stumbled out the door into the
halo of the streetlamps, ready to take
his corded flame
Her thighs burned from the thought
knowing the bad choices she was
about to make once again
she twists her body onto a chair
sipping her bourbon from a dirty glass
The stranger in black was the bang
in last night's beat she had another
in mind for the night
Just like that she spotted him, he was
a hidden concoction in suede shoes
with a twisted smile
He stopped in her shadow, he had a
cruel way about him, giving him bed
room eye's she spoke his language
They stumbled out the door into the
halo of the streetlamps, ready to take
his corded flame
Her thighs burned from the thought
knowing the bad choices she was
about to make once again
Published 13th Feb 2016
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13th Feb 2016 9:26am
suede shoes could only lead to sordid affairs.
gotta be slick as Elvis to excite a lady like her.
sexy episode, Tommie...
gotta be slick as Elvis to excite a lady like her.
sexy episode, Tommie...
14th Feb 2016 2:48am
13th Feb 2016 4:52pm
"Bourbon, Bedroom Eye's & Bad Choices"
Goddamn tommiel, You had me at this Title
and immediately sent primal-urges up my
spine beginning from you know where... you
made my c*%k and spine become strong.
You also accomplished evoking some buried
memories, You tantalizing Sorceress.
The Bourbon is Smooth going down and warms
the body in all the right places.
Those "Bedroom Eye's," aka; "Come; Fuck Me!" Eye's
were always the most exxxciting ones to see when
going into an haunt and desiring something to
entertain and to take home for the rest of the night
and pleasure over and over again.
As to whether or not it's been a bad choice, is up to the
participants perceptions and expectations I guess, and
as long as the one picked-up wasn't a psychopath.
I guess that there is also that last bit of information that
goes into the equation of whether or not it was an good
or bad choice, i.e, when you wake up and rollover with
the goggles having been removed and either say,
"YUMMY; maybe just one more romp before I leave," or,
you exclaim, "Holy-shit, Goddamn; was I that Fucked-up?"
And then the, "VOW," comes...
"To All the God's I Vow; NEVER AGAIN." Ha-ha
Sorry I'm rambling-on here but I enjoyed this one... Pan
Goddamn tommiel, You had me at this Title
and immediately sent primal-urges up my
spine beginning from you know where... you
made my c*%k and spine become strong.
You also accomplished evoking some buried
memories, You tantalizing Sorceress.
The Bourbon is Smooth going down and warms
the body in all the right places.
Those "Bedroom Eye's," aka; "Come; Fuck Me!" Eye's
were always the most exxxciting ones to see when
going into an haunt and desiring something to
entertain and to take home for the rest of the night
and pleasure over and over again.
As to whether or not it's been a bad choice, is up to the
participants perceptions and expectations I guess, and
as long as the one picked-up wasn't a psychopath.
I guess that there is also that last bit of information that
goes into the equation of whether or not it was an good
or bad choice, i.e, when you wake up and rollover with
the goggles having been removed and either say,
"YUMMY; maybe just one more romp before I leave," or,
you exclaim, "Holy-shit, Goddamn; was I that Fucked-up?"
And then the, "VOW," comes...
"To All the God's I Vow; NEVER AGAIN." Ha-ha
Sorry I'm rambling-on here but I enjoyed this one... Pan
14th Feb 2016 2:53am
You nailed it Pan!
I'm happy this got your attention, what a wonderful comment! You're more then welcome to ramble anytime. Thank you for reading me and adding it to your RL. 😊
I'm happy this got your attention, what a wonderful comment! You're more then welcome to ramble anytime. Thank you for reading me and adding it to your RL. 😊
14th Feb 2016 00:09am
Many a bad decision were made due to bourbon, wild turkey specifically
Intense write T
Intense write T
14th Feb 2016 2:55am
