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The Slut

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Eyes that smoke with passion �
Suggesting lustful longings �
I see her in the bar no bra �
Doing a sluttish solo dance �
To decadent music �
Slippery saxophone notes �
Slide across her sinuous curves �
Muted trumpet wails for a strumpet �
Her hands caress her thighs �
Like sliding snakes �
Her hips gyrate inciting
Delighting �
No underwear �
Inviting �
I stare �
She doesn�t care �
Torn her scant dress �
Her hair�s awry �
Mascara�s run �
She's had a cry �
Lipstick smeared �
She looks weird �
A total fucking mess �
So why do I have �
A raging hard on?

Written by blocat

Published 12th Feb 2016 | Edited 14th Feb 2016

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Re. The Slut

emmastg (Emma St Giles)

12th Feb 2016 11:54am

I like this. It has pace.

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blocat

12th Feb 2016 3:38pm

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

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Re. The Slut

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- Edited 23rd Apr 2016 5:47pm

12th Feb 2016 3:49pm

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blocat

12th Feb 2016 4:14pm

Thank you for the kind comment. Much appreciated.

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Re. The Slut

calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)

- Edited 12th Feb 2016 4:48pm

12th Feb 2016 4:44pm

I love the mix of calous and funny..pace quickens with sexual notes in a jazz tune..and compassion here...i pick up compassion ...and i like the brand...
softens the title and your hard on..lol nope.
this is fabulous..a favorite of yours...though i say that a lot..lol
but love your slice kitty cat...
and i am left with an image of Big T's big ol stiff willy...grinnin one eye willy to match my other favorite grinnin mug...lol

ehh...love you sweet cheeks...
you do add giggles to my days...
jen

this would be perrrfect for my latest comp btw...Portrait
.through words...!