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~Sugar~
Creamy skin
she's here to destroy
him, fill his mind with scars
he asked for it, always searching
for a feeling, any kind, just to feel
she'll pull him close
upon her swelling hills and
sooth just his tip
her tongue was like crushed
velvet dancing
to his rhythm
urging him to cum
she's here to destroy
him, fill his mind with scars
he asked for it, always searching
for a feeling, any kind, just to feel
she'll pull him close
upon her swelling hills and
sooth just his tip
her tongue was like crushed
velvet dancing
to his rhythm
urging him to cum
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6th Feb 2016 1:39pm
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6th Feb 2016 5:35am
Just lovely. "her swelling hills..." "velvet dancing to his rhythm urging him to cum"
Now those are lines to curl your toes to.
Now those are lines to curl your toes to.
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6th Feb 2016 1:40pm
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6th Feb 2016 7:10am
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6th Feb 2016 1:41pm
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6th Feb 2016 6:05pm
Very sexy Tommie...anyone reading this would be sure to feel it as well...
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6th Feb 2016 8:03pm
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7th Feb 2016 00:38am
Tommie, might I ask as to how the fire department manages the frequent call outs to your abode?
Excuse me - I have to go and run things under cold running water for 10 minutes...
Excuse me - I have to go and run things under cold running water for 10 minutes...
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7th Feb 2016 00:51am
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7th Feb 2016 7:40pm
"upon her swelling hills" - reminds me of a protest by our Countryside Alliance in London last decade whose most frequent slogan was Hands Off Our Hills (against plans for our national parks).
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7th Feb 2016 7:50pm