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"No Power, No Fear"
No power,
No fear,
Voices we'll never hear.
No War,
No Terror,
No skin colour barrier.
No more abuse
No pain and
No more suffering
Justice is never near
No time to waste
No accepting silence
No living in this darkness
No death
No tears and
No heartbreak
No tragedies
No disasters
No questions left unasked.
No power
No fear
Voices we'll never hear.
No acting like we don't fucking care!!
P.S. now go back and take out the word "no" and you'll see the real meaning of this poem.
No fear,
Voices we'll never hear.
No War,
No Terror,
No skin colour barrier.
No more abuse
No pain and
No more suffering
Justice is never near
No time to waste
No accepting silence
No living in this darkness
No death
No tears and
No heartbreak
No tragedies
No disasters
No questions left unasked.
No power
No fear
Voices we'll never hear.
No acting like we don't fucking care!!
P.S. now go back and take out the word "no" and you'll see the real meaning of this poem.
Published 1st Feb 2016
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2nd Feb 2016 6:45pm
Pho3nix19xx, you have scripted an
poem that sounds like my style of
feeling and thinking.
You've described many of the things
that I think about within the lines above.
I like how you wrote this and then ended
it by suggesting the reader exclude all of
the "No's," which then give it an all new
perspective - an dual-layered rendering
here.
Well-done... Dantalion
poem that sounds like my style of
feeling and thinking.
You've described many of the things
that I think about within the lines above.
I like how you wrote this and then ended
it by suggesting the reader exclude all of
the "No's," which then give it an all new
perspective - an dual-layered rendering
here.
Well-done... Dantalion
3rd Feb 2016 6:14am
Thanks actually been trying to write this style of poem for a while now but haven't been able to make it work until this one. Thanks for the read and comment
Anonymous
4th Feb 2016 10:16pm
Wow... fucking hell. This is great Pho3nix19xx. It's just...
5th Feb 2016 7:24am
Thanks I'm really happy with the way this poem turned out, wasn't a hundred percent sure how it would end up when I was writing it lol
