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Dat One Fuck Up
Dat one fuck up cost us our relationship the need of love and affection daily was the cause of it
We put everything into it and dat one fuck up had to just go destroy the shit his love was what I was craving but I haven't been getting none because he had just been so busy lately
We put everything into it and dat one fuck up had to just go destroy the shit his love was what I was craving but I haven't been getting none because he had just been so busy lately
Published 28th Jan 2016
| Edited 1st Feb 2016
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29th Jan 2016 1:59pm
All it takes is one fuck up? Wow... Everyone makes mistakes though...
Sadly I understand it all too well.
Sadly I understand it all too well.
Thanks ...I appreciate it so much !😊You are a great poet and yes every one does
30th Jan 2016 00:59am
Thank u, but I'm puzzled... Did I miss a comment on a piece I wrote? can't recall :(
