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the diviner and the shade
A Collaboration: Magdalena and Alexander Case
beneath a naked crown of hickory
you stood; the diviner, dressed in black
untouched by the shadow of the moon
drawing halos in a bed of snow
that night, the one you watched
slowly burn with your touch, reaching down
you scorched the frozen earth to retrieve me
carefully unsheathed like a pecan husk
my body, my soul, split in two
held together by one—
that night
shape shifting storm clouds
ruptured spleen lightning
heart attack and thunder
mother earth unleashed
heaven felt pointless, and before i could
tell you, you covered my mouth
stealing the words under my breath
you asked me to let you in [remember]
when your chanting lips met my throat
warm spells humming through my pores
your arms curled; tying me with holy vines
static pulsed blue light between heaving chests
bare bones entrapped by divinity
i can make the darkness cry
hold your heart till the tears fall
bowing winter at your feet
untapped, red maple dripped
from your breath—
it set me ablaze
the tremor of my surrender [you felt it too]
whatever black magic you slipped inside
let it take me, find the mysteries you seek
the diviner of the dead
will have his dark angel tonight
languished love rising from the flame
unearthed whispers echoing her name
Written by Magdalena and Alexander Case for the "erotic collaboration*" comp.
beneath a naked crown of hickory
you stood; the diviner, dressed in black
untouched by the shadow of the moon
drawing halos in a bed of snow
that night, the one you watched
slowly burn with your touch, reaching down
you scorched the frozen earth to retrieve me
carefully unsheathed like a pecan husk
my body, my soul, split in two
held together by one—
that night
shape shifting storm clouds
ruptured spleen lightning
heart attack and thunder
mother earth unleashed
heaven felt pointless, and before i could
tell you, you covered my mouth
stealing the words under my breath
you asked me to let you in [remember]
when your chanting lips met my throat
warm spells humming through my pores
your arms curled; tying me with holy vines
static pulsed blue light between heaving chests
bare bones entrapped by divinity
i can make the darkness cry
hold your heart till the tears fall
bowing winter at your feet
untapped, red maple dripped
from your breath—
it set me ablaze
the tremor of my surrender [you felt it too]
whatever black magic you slipped inside
let it take me, find the mysteries you seek
the diviner of the dead
will have his dark angel tonight
languished love rising from the flame
unearthed whispers echoing her name
Written by Magdalena and Alexander Case for the "erotic collaboration*" comp.
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Re. the diviner and the shade
27th Jan 2016 8:39pm
Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
13th Aug 2017 9:51am
Thanks heaps, Hades... apologies for shocking late reply. I believe I was in some soul searching rehab shortly after posting his piece.
Re. the diviner and the shade
28th Jan 2016 5:15am
(Whatever black magic you slipped inside) this reminded me of some confidant buddy swore to sexoparapsyche he observed a very smart looking very handsome blacker than villages midnights she devil hovering beneath his room's roof. Nice collaboration anyhow.
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
13th Aug 2017 9:54am
Sounds like a voodoo astral traveling nymphomaniac to me. Thanks heaps for dropping to leave your thoughts, man.
Re. the diviner and the shade
28th Jan 2016 7:16am
two robed & hooded lovers,
a little afraid, but undenying,
as the darkness cries.
beautiful composing...
a little afraid, but undenying,
as the darkness cries.
beautiful composing...
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
If my memory serves me correctly, I believe my inspiration for this poem came to me during an acid trip whilst having phone sex with Betty Ford's dead mother... or I could have been watching The Corpse Bride. Thanks heaps for your comment, Mr Feddeler.
Re. the diviner and the shade
28th Jan 2016 7:42am
Thank you Alexander, twas a pleasure. Subtle as asked, with a twist of dark. Great collaborating with you again. :)
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
Well, from what I recall the poem was written very quickly, which always a good sign for me. I think our dark imaginations somehow meld together in poetry.
The video took some time to get going, but I'm not one to force creativity; the muse will come when the time is right.
Thanks again for the opportunity to collaborate with you again and for your patients with the video.
The video took some time to get going, but I'm not one to force creativity; the muse will come when the time is right.
Thanks again for the opportunity to collaborate with you again and for your patients with the video.
Re. the diviner and the shade
28th Jan 2016 9:29am
Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
13th Aug 2017 11:09am
Hey, necrophilia ain't everyone's cuppa tea, so I'm stoked you thought this piece was cool, whale. Thanks for the comment, brother.
Re. the diviner and the shade
28th Jan 2016 4:33pm
Dark Arts...and Dark Hearts and souls intertwined.....merged and melded....unbridled passion released......
My Friends.....you have combined your amazing abilities to create an exceptionally powerful piece that resonates within the depths of my Darker half...casting its special spell that prompts me to revisit---time and time again!!! I
( Proudly including this within my list!!!)
Incredible Ink!!!
My best to the both of you!
Sl`ainte !!!...
My Friends.....you have combined your amazing abilities to create an exceptionally powerful piece that resonates within the depths of my Darker half...casting its special spell that prompts me to revisit---time and time again!!! I
( Proudly including this within my list!!!)
Incredible Ink!!!
My best to the both of you!
Sl`ainte !!!...
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Re. the diviner and the shade
i read this last night after book club & was just a little too drunk to comment [decently] o.O
so here's the edited version:
the two of you are fecking magic together. this is subtle, sensual, macabre, beautiful, bloody shiver inducing poetry.
"ruptured spleen lightning"
^^^^^^
for god sake smdh so damn good.
your first collab floored me but this... gawddamn!
any chance of a reading? would loooooooove to hear this spoken by you two.
will go make room in my reading list, it's a keeper
xo
so here's the edited version:
the two of you are fecking magic together. this is subtle, sensual, macabre, beautiful, bloody shiver inducing poetry.
"ruptured spleen lightning"
^^^^^^
for god sake smdh so damn good.
your first collab floored me but this... gawddamn!
any chance of a reading? would loooooooove to hear this spoken by you two.
will go make room in my reading list, it's a keeper
xo
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
30th Jan 2016 9:42pm
Thank you for the great review Katja. I wonder if Mr Case would be up for doing an audio of this with me? I would love to. :) x
Thank you every one. :)
Thank you every one. :)
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2017 9:18pm
The video for this is everything I love about audio collabs. Mags your tone added this gorgeous mystery to the piece. Case, I don't know if intentional but your rhythm of reading fitted the music to great effect.
... well wasn't that just bloody fantastic.
... well wasn't that just bloody fantastic.
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Re: Re. the diviner and the shade
I agree, about Magdalena's tone, she did a stellar job with the reading.
Regarding the rhythm of the reading and fitting with the music could have something to with my magic BPM number. :)
Stoked you thought it was bloody fantastic. Thanks heaps for the awesome feedback, Missy.
Regarding the rhythm of the reading and fitting with the music could have something to with my magic BPM number. :)
Stoked you thought it was bloody fantastic. Thanks heaps for the awesome feedback, Missy.
Re. the diviner and the shade
6th Aug 2017 9:43pm
ooooooh the koshka was heard and a reading was done.... eons later... but so worth the wait.
superb audio from both of you
if i could add this to my list twice, i would
superb audio from both of you
if i could add this to my list twice, i would
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Re. the diviner and the shade
7th Aug 2017 1:32am
Sheer brilliance... and the contrasting accents were absolutely divine ~ 👑😎🎈🌞🌷
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Re. the diviner and the shade
30th Aug 2017 1:17pm
Mr. Case & lovely Magdalena
I am utterly spellbound
you both blew me away
with the sheer magic & beauty of this write
the reading is flawless..
love Brenda
I am utterly spellbound
you both blew me away
with the sheer magic & beauty of this write
the reading is flawless..
love Brenda
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