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Your smile makes me reckless
Your smile makes me reckless
I’m invincible and free
I’d hurl myself off cliffs of lunacy
just to make you smile at me.
Your eyes give me confidence
I’m limitless and strong
Wild with passion to light up those eyes
and hear you praise me with your song.
Your presence makes me powerful
I’m unashamed and brave
Awakening dauntless to the hope
I could wreck myself and still be saved.
Your care makes me careless
I’m dangerous and wild
Reckless, I'd smash my brittle heart
Just for a chance to see you smile.
Published 19th Jan 2016
| Edited 15th Feb 2016
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19th Jan 2016 1:27am
It's funny sometimes when the same feeling can make you write a love poem just as easily as jump off a cliff.
19th Jan 2016 3:18am
Love is a crazy thing, isn't it? Thanks for stopping by, and welcome to DU !
19th Jan 2016 3:03am
19th Jan 2016 3:20am
I hope that's a good thing.... :)
Welcome, and thanks for your comment.
Welcome, and thanks for your comment.
19th Jan 2016 10:36am
25th Jan 2016 3:30am
Anonymous
19th Jan 2016 12:30pm
everybody deserves a smile that makes them feel reckless :-)
25th Jan 2016 3:29am
13th Feb 2016 2:09am
Beautifully haunting,
.. .know of this place
very well.. too well.
Indentations
-Howlings
.. .know of this place
very well.. too well.
Indentations
-Howlings
13th Feb 2016 2:20am
Simultaneously sweet and painful, liberating and self-destructive it is.....
Thanks for taking time to drop by and comment.
Thanks for taking time to drop by and comment.
19th Feb 2016 00:25am
This is a tres romantique piece. It's beautiful when someone moves us to love ourselves enough to take risks. My two favorites passages are:
"I could wreck myself and still be saved."
and
"Your care makes me careless"
Brava!
"I could wreck myself and still be saved."
and
"Your care makes me careless"
Brava!
Very grateful for your kind comments, and the follow....
one of my favorite writes at the moment....
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