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"My Transgressions Advantageously Seized-on," (Slavish Servant of her Deviant-urges).
"Take me My Domina; rape my inhibitions: strip the
blinders from my eyes and let me view the darkest
you with clarity of vision
Let me for my transgressions not seek for repentance
from some intangible power; but, let your claws and
scourges shred the weakness from this pathetic
existence, leaving me to the depths of your (auto) erotic
prowess"
"Accipe me Domina mea ; opprimere, me locus
detrahe blinders ab oculis meis et tibi me tenet
considerate claritatem visionis
Sit mihi pro adversariis meis sceleribus non quaeret
amplius utrum pśnitentić ab aliqua potentia attingi
posse ; sed, unguibus et flagellis subditum concidit
infirmitatem ex misellus existentiam , relicto me in
profundum cordis vestri ( auto ) amatorios virtute"
If I Fucked-up and did you wrong, would you
forgive me and set me free, or would I be your
Slave for eternity and I, you would own
To me, either way doesn't matter (although the
latter could be pleasurable); if you didn't then
that's a bridge burned-down that I'd again never
cross: it'd be my loss with nothing but ashes
swirling in the wind, round and round to plague
my mind as a remembrance
But, even with the unforgivable there's redemption -
I could be your indebted slave that obeys your
every whim
Vengeance
Spite
Retribution - abuse me and cut me like an knife
Relentlessly, mercilessly with wrath and malice pure
and concise, me silence with gags of the torn rags;
the tattered and shredded remnants of another day
Let me unconsidered be, an revenant, redeemable
Tortured; whipped with scourges that you deem are
suitable for my cleansing - not to purge my wretched
soul, but to gratify the twisted urges that you feel pulsing
within the morbid, inner-demons of the chambers that
you condone
Suspend me in-between the upper-echelons and the
nether-regions of the earth; with chains or flesh-hooks
restrain my body from escape and unleash your worst
Make my spirit within to rue the day that I your loyalty
disgraced; and bend my will until I your every demand
in subservience to, submissively obey... let the error of
my transgression, "My Domina" become to you the
catalyst of an advantageous parlay
blinders from my eyes and let me view the darkest
you with clarity of vision
Let me for my transgressions not seek for repentance
from some intangible power; but, let your claws and
scourges shred the weakness from this pathetic
existence, leaving me to the depths of your (auto) erotic
prowess"
"Accipe me Domina mea ; opprimere, me locus
detrahe blinders ab oculis meis et tibi me tenet
considerate claritatem visionis
Sit mihi pro adversariis meis sceleribus non quaeret
amplius utrum pśnitentić ab aliqua potentia attingi
posse ; sed, unguibus et flagellis subditum concidit
infirmitatem ex misellus existentiam , relicto me in
profundum cordis vestri ( auto ) amatorios virtute"
If I Fucked-up and did you wrong, would you
forgive me and set me free, or would I be your
Slave for eternity and I, you would own
To me, either way doesn't matter (although the
latter could be pleasurable); if you didn't then
that's a bridge burned-down that I'd again never
cross: it'd be my loss with nothing but ashes
swirling in the wind, round and round to plague
my mind as a remembrance
But, even with the unforgivable there's redemption -
I could be your indebted slave that obeys your
every whim
Vengeance
Spite
Retribution - abuse me and cut me like an knife
Relentlessly, mercilessly with wrath and malice pure
and concise, me silence with gags of the torn rags;
the tattered and shredded remnants of another day
Let me unconsidered be, an revenant, redeemable
Tortured; whipped with scourges that you deem are
suitable for my cleansing - not to purge my wretched
soul, but to gratify the twisted urges that you feel pulsing
within the morbid, inner-demons of the chambers that
you condone
Suspend me in-between the upper-echelons and the
nether-regions of the earth; with chains or flesh-hooks
restrain my body from escape and unleash your worst
Make my spirit within to rue the day that I your loyalty
disgraced; and bend my will until I your every demand
in subservience to, submissively obey... let the error of
my transgression, "My Domina" become to you the
catalyst of an advantageous parlay
Published 18th Jan 2016
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19th Jan 2016 00:08am
19th Jan 2016 3:40am
I Dantalion, Thank You kindly tearrapoetry
for taking the timeout and reading my crazy-ass
write here and for the wonderful comment.
Although this one sounds as though it's riding
the fence of some kind of fetish or desire to be
punished for my offences, (maybe subconsciously
I do), it's more of an write about the relationship
between an Sub and his Mistress that he's come
short of total abandonment to which is typically
the requirement.
Anyways, sorry for the rambling and the explanation
that I wandered-off into.
Thank You tearrapoetry... Dantalion
for taking the timeout and reading my crazy-ass
write here and for the wonderful comment.
Although this one sounds as though it's riding
the fence of some kind of fetish or desire to be
punished for my offences, (maybe subconsciously
I do), it's more of an write about the relationship
between an Sub and his Mistress that he's come
short of total abandonment to which is typically
the requirement.
Anyways, sorry for the rambling and the explanation
that I wandered-off into.
Thank You tearrapoetry... Dantalion
19th Jan 2016 00:14am
Suspend me in-between the upper-echelons and the
nether-regions of the earth; with chains or flesh-hooks
restrain my body from escape and unleash your worst
These word's took me to a whole different level! Insane write, LOVE it! 😊
nether-regions of the earth; with chains or flesh-hooks
restrain my body from escape and unleash your worst
These word's took me to a whole different level! Insane write, LOVE it! 😊
19th Jan 2016 4:54am
tommielynn it is very good to hear from you
and to receive a comment/compliment coming
from a Writer such as Yourself... I've followed
you just about from the beginning of joining DUP.
In my opinion I think that one of the greatest
things to hear from another Writer/poet is one
that causes the reader to be moved (in any manner -
from the least to the greatest or from the simplest to
the most profound) and have it effect them.
Thank You for choosing to follow my updates
and to read and comment in such a positive
manner: if you ever see the need to change
anything ever, then just let me know - thanks again Pan
and to receive a comment/compliment coming
from a Writer such as Yourself... I've followed
you just about from the beginning of joining DUP.
In my opinion I think that one of the greatest
things to hear from another Writer/poet is one
that causes the reader to be moved (in any manner -
from the least to the greatest or from the simplest to
the most profound) and have it effect them.
Thank You for choosing to follow my updates
and to read and comment in such a positive
manner: if you ever see the need to change
anything ever, then just let me know - thanks again Pan
19th Jan 2016 1:52am
19th Jan 2016 4:59am
sinisterpenz I once again Thank
You for the read and compliment.
I always want to write material that
makes people stop and think and
shake their heads.
much Appreciation sinister... Dantalion
You for the read and compliment.
I always want to write material that
makes people stop and think and
shake their heads.
much Appreciation sinister... Dantalion
19th Jan 2016 11:32pm
22nd Jan 2016 10:16am
I think it goes from stronger to smoother. It read it from the bottom to the top, each stanza, and it was stronger, hehe.
Remember Polanski´s last movie.
I´m stuck with the verse "abuse me and cut me like an knife"... I don't get it... "cut me like a knife", is this magical realism? How can that be?
I like the unexpected in this line, but confused me.
Good job, loved your thoughts :)))
Remember Polanski´s last movie.
I´m stuck with the verse "abuse me and cut me like an knife"... I don't get it... "cut me like a knife", is this magical realism? How can that be?
I like the unexpected in this line, but confused me.
Good job, loved your thoughts :)))
