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"Designation of the Murderer - Hopefully"
You're a Fucking Murderer; you do things that are unheard
of and that are for the mentally-sick and disturbed reserved...
things that most of us don't speak of; living-out of your
devious imaginations, and internal, devilish depraved urges
The actions that you take into your hands and commit on
an whim, we wouldn't even contemplate doing
Now, the bloods on your hands because you went as far
to carry-out your conceived and premeditated vile plans
You looked at the man/woman/child/crowd and exacted
your ritual, whether first-time or now habitual; first-offender
or mass-murderer, to me it makes no difference - you went
to far and stepped-into shoes not made for you
Into your hands, you took the liberty; you went
ahead and became an Fucking Deity, an Death angel -
this ain't Mythology, you don't get to be, don't have the
right to choose, unto you its not been given the role of
Valkyrie or even the Fates
Now a Marks been put on your head; you're now
walking in death, time borrowed; any breath could
be your last - when it looks you in the eyes don't
be surprised as it claims your soul with a wicked
and satisfied, maniacal laugh...
Bastard, I hope you put-up a fight so that it shreds
you into pieces...
Because -
Now, the blood of Innocents is on your hands as
you went to far and carried-out your conceived and
premeditated vile plans
You looked at the man/woman/child/crowd and
exacted your ritual, whether first-time or now habitual;
first-offender or mass-murderer, to me it makes no
difference - you went to far and stepped-into shoes not
made for you
Cock-sucker payments due; the Reaper's looking you in
the eye and Charon's waiting to take you over
The tides come in for to carry the soul that's vacant and
void; nothing there to redeem - just a shell whose final
place is the lowest, darkest regions of Hel
I hope that She embraces you with open arms and gladly
tortures you eternally - your appropriate Reward you void,
wretched soul that only brought into Gaia blood that from
the ground ascends in cries and sighs and desire to be
avenged
Hopefully when you enter in they'll take a jagged bone and
carve-out that inked tear painted under your eye; the one
never put there from sorrow, but for bragging-rights
Now, the blood of Innocents is on your hands as you
went to far and carried-out your conceived and premeditated
vile plans
You looked at the man/woman/child/crowd and exacted
your ritual, whether first-time or now habitual; first-offender
or mass-murderer, to me it makes no difference - you went
to far and stepped-into shoes not made for you
Cock-sucker payments due; the Reaper's looking you in
theeye and Charon's waiting to take you over
The tides come in for to carry the soul that's vacant and
void; nothing there to redeem - just a shell whose final
place is the lowest, darkest regions of Hel
I can only hope that the souls that took and slaughtered,
raped and tortured; molested, toyed with before you put
them out of he misery that you put them through, can view
what Hel has waiting for to do to you
of and that are for the mentally-sick and disturbed reserved...
things that most of us don't speak of; living-out of your
devious imaginations, and internal, devilish depraved urges
The actions that you take into your hands and commit on
an whim, we wouldn't even contemplate doing
Now, the bloods on your hands because you went as far
to carry-out your conceived and premeditated vile plans
You looked at the man/woman/child/crowd and exacted
your ritual, whether first-time or now habitual; first-offender
or mass-murderer, to me it makes no difference - you went
to far and stepped-into shoes not made for you
Into your hands, you took the liberty; you went
ahead and became an Fucking Deity, an Death angel -
this ain't Mythology, you don't get to be, don't have the
right to choose, unto you its not been given the role of
Valkyrie or even the Fates
Now a Marks been put on your head; you're now
walking in death, time borrowed; any breath could
be your last - when it looks you in the eyes don't
be surprised as it claims your soul with a wicked
and satisfied, maniacal laugh...
Bastard, I hope you put-up a fight so that it shreds
you into pieces...
Because -
Now, the blood of Innocents is on your hands as
you went to far and carried-out your conceived and
premeditated vile plans
You looked at the man/woman/child/crowd and
exacted your ritual, whether first-time or now habitual;
first-offender or mass-murderer, to me it makes no
difference - you went to far and stepped-into shoes not
made for you
Cock-sucker payments due; the Reaper's looking you in
the eye and Charon's waiting to take you over
The tides come in for to carry the soul that's vacant and
void; nothing there to redeem - just a shell whose final
place is the lowest, darkest regions of Hel
I hope that She embraces you with open arms and gladly
tortures you eternally - your appropriate Reward you void,
wretched soul that only brought into Gaia blood that from
the ground ascends in cries and sighs and desire to be
avenged
Hopefully when you enter in they'll take a jagged bone and
carve-out that inked tear painted under your eye; the one
never put there from sorrow, but for bragging-rights
Now, the blood of Innocents is on your hands as you
went to far and carried-out your conceived and premeditated
vile plans
You looked at the man/woman/child/crowd and exacted
your ritual, whether first-time or now habitual; first-offender
or mass-murderer, to me it makes no difference - you went
to far and stepped-into shoes not made for you
Cock-sucker payments due; the Reaper's looking you in
theeye and Charon's waiting to take you over
The tides come in for to carry the soul that's vacant and
void; nothing there to redeem - just a shell whose final
place is the lowest, darkest regions of Hel
I can only hope that the souls that took and slaughtered,
raped and tortured; molested, toyed with before you put
them out of he misery that you put them through, can view
what Hel has waiting for to do to you
Published 18th Jan 2016
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18th Jan 2016 4:18am
fucking great rage piece , kinda odd tho you condem the murderer-rapist etc to death in turn becoming a murderer? or at least conspirator?
18th Jan 2016 6:28am
Hey sinisterpenz, I appreciate your read
of this and the great response and the Q & A
on the one part of it concerning the rapist.
Let me see if I get what you're asking about
that particular part... were you asking where
the rapist and murderer connect and the desire
that I have for seeing them die - as in the murderer
deserves to die and the rapist also.
I did throw the rapist into the story because, "Yes,"
I do despise a rapist but, are they in the same
category: I think that a cold-blooded murderer
deserves death - maybe not manslaughter where it
could have been accidental and not intentional, as
in the case where they've become hunters searching-
out and plotting/premeditating their murders.
Now I don't know about the rapist who deserves harsh
punishment, especially if he's become a serial-rapist.
I think, especially if he's done it once and continues to
do it, then for one, he needs life-imprisonment and if
before being caught he's done it multiple times then
possible castration... but that's just me; I feel no remorse -
he's destroyed many souls.
A rapist/murderer - death. A child-rapist, even molester - death.
It's just my own personal opinion but I think if the penalties for
these savages were not so lax but fitting of the crime, the cases
of these things happening would drop drastically... I think that
they just know that they're able to pretty much able to get away
with it with hardly no consequences.
Dantalion... And Yes, Dantalion is another pen-name that I go by
of this and the great response and the Q & A
on the one part of it concerning the rapist.
Let me see if I get what you're asking about
that particular part... were you asking where
the rapist and murderer connect and the desire
that I have for seeing them die - as in the murderer
deserves to die and the rapist also.
I did throw the rapist into the story because, "Yes,"
I do despise a rapist but, are they in the same
category: I think that a cold-blooded murderer
deserves death - maybe not manslaughter where it
could have been accidental and not intentional, as
in the case where they've become hunters searching-
out and plotting/premeditating their murders.
Now I don't know about the rapist who deserves harsh
punishment, especially if he's become a serial-rapist.
I think, especially if he's done it once and continues to
do it, then for one, he needs life-imprisonment and if
before being caught he's done it multiple times then
possible castration... but that's just me; I feel no remorse -
he's destroyed many souls.
A rapist/murderer - death. A child-rapist, even molester - death.
It's just my own personal opinion but I think if the penalties for
these savages were not so lax but fitting of the crime, the cases
of these things happening would drop drastically... I think that
they just know that they're able to pretty much able to get away
with it with hardly no consequences.
Dantalion... And Yes, Dantalion is another pen-name that I go by
18th Jan 2016 3:36pm
i agree with rapist and child molesters part there scum and need more laws binding them . murder well there pretty stiff on that lol, i did a little time for stabbin this rapist in the neck a few times caught him pants down choking this chick on a picnic table , so i ran up and stuck him a few. the victim testified in my trial ultimately cutting mad time off, she said she was just about to black out when she heard my voice yelling at the dude and stabbin him up, his throat always smiles now
18th Jan 2016 4:28am
oh oh how much is he worth how much money they put forward to have a hitman come kill him?
18th Jan 2016 1:25pm
I agree with Sinister P, this IS a great rage piece! Had me noddin my head n fired up!! lol excellent verbal ranting bro.
18th Jan 2016 7:18pm
It's kind of funny (in a away) Poetik that
you said you were noddin your head and
fired-up... I don't know for sure if you meant
noddin as though you were listening to a
song or noddin in agreeance; probably in
agreeance, I'm assuming but anyways, my
point is that when I was originally writing
this I was doing it with the idea in mind to
make it somewhat of a metal song with a
very mature and intense subject in the
lyrics of it to bring about awareness to this
topic and to incite people towards some kind
of a change.
Thanks again Bro for the read and input... Dantalion
you said you were noddin your head and
fired-up... I don't know for sure if you meant
noddin as though you were listening to a
song or noddin in agreeance; probably in
agreeance, I'm assuming but anyways, my
point is that when I was originally writing
this I was doing it with the idea in mind to
make it somewhat of a metal song with a
very mature and intense subject in the
lyrics of it to bring about awareness to this
topic and to incite people towards some kind
of a change.
Thanks again Bro for the read and input... Dantalion
18th Jan 2016 6:38pm
This is very intriguing. It makes me want to know more...but....at the same time not know because what they did seems vile. Well dobe
18th Jan 2016 7:41pm
Morning notebook_always. I Thank
You for the read and comments and
for the intrigue concerning my write.
What actually prompted me to do this
write is a current ongoing hi-profile case
here where a 2 y/o baby boy was missing
for 6 months (and Mom and boyfriend lied
and said they had no idea what happened
to him or his whereabouts) and finally the
boyfriend admitted to knowing where his
(body) was located (this after they made a
determination of aggravated-manslaughter
against the boyfriend) and only led them to
him to receive a plea bargain.
His body was found on an abandoned lot
near a Church, not buried, under a pile of
tires... to me meaning that whatever this fuck,
or the Mother did to him, they then in a rush
took him to the property and quickly rid
themselves of him.
This kind of shit just FUCKING burns me up.
Thank You for the read and comments... Dantalion
You for the read and comments and
for the intrigue concerning my write.
What actually prompted me to do this
write is a current ongoing hi-profile case
here where a 2 y/o baby boy was missing
for 6 months (and Mom and boyfriend lied
and said they had no idea what happened
to him or his whereabouts) and finally the
boyfriend admitted to knowing where his
(body) was located (this after they made a
determination of aggravated-manslaughter
against the boyfriend) and only led them to
him to receive a plea bargain.
His body was found on an abandoned lot
near a Church, not buried, under a pile of
tires... to me meaning that whatever this fuck,
or the Mother did to him, they then in a rush
took him to the property and quickly rid
themselves of him.
This kind of shit just FUCKING burns me up.
Thank You for the read and comments... Dantalion
