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I had to use your keys
To get into my heart
After locking myself out

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 18th Jan 2016

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Anonymous

19th Jan 2016 8:38am

I can relate so well to this piece. At times, we need to see ourselves through the loving eyes of another to remind us who we are.

to make it short and powerful is great..even my comment is too long for haiku ;) lol
awesome

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SatInUGal (Kumar)

19th Jan 2016 4:13pm

I was taught in high school English class to avoid "excess verbosity", but I think I was headed to short poems anyway. I think it was Ezra Pound who sought after "the thing itself". That's me. Thanks for the deep appreciation mikimoondancer!