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some change...
I asked this suavely dressed bloke
in an expensive looking suit
for some change...
he started prodding me in the chest
with his finger, working himself up
good and proper, and swearing like
my uncle jo...
I couldn't help thinking
well yeah, fair enough, that's
some change...
Published 15th Jan 2016
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15th Jan 2016 10:53pm
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15th Jan 2016 10:59pm
16th Jan 2016 3:27am
16th Jan 2016 10:30pm
very clever expose of 'spare change' - I always wondered what that was :-)
16th Jan 2016 10:32pm
16th Jan 2016 6:06pm
Wellll.....i must say...you certainly have a way of bringing out --shall we say--a bit more of the 'insidious' side of someone.......(LOL!) :p
Always the most welcomed unexpected....in your style, mo Chara! xo
( your uncle jo....couldn't help smiling , here....as it brought back memories....for me it was my uncle mike ( "mickey")....a mouth that should have made its way to confession 7 days a week--definite XXX-rated to be sure!!! :) )
Always the most welcomed unexpected....in your style, mo Chara! xo
( your uncle jo....couldn't help smiling , here....as it brought back memories....for me it was my uncle mike ( "mickey")....a mouth that should have made its way to confession 7 days a week--definite XXX-rated to be sure!!! :) )
16th Jan 2016 10:35pm
I don't know if our uncles
would have got on, but I'd
have loved to listen to
them arguing..:)
would have got on, but I'd
have loved to listen to
them arguing..:)
17th Jan 2016 00:01am
17th Jan 2016 6:44am
ch'ch'ch'ch'changes!
rightly relevant to recent
obituaries of the stars!
rightly relevant to recent
obituaries of the stars!
