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my love
my love is strong
my love is tough
when i love
i love hard
thats why its so hard for me to give it up
when i love i cry
when i love i smile
so when i love jus knw i gave my all
so please dont break my heart
my love is tough
when i love
i love hard
thats why its so hard for me to give it up
when i love i cry
when i love i smile
so when i love jus knw i gave my all
so please dont break my heart
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Re. my love
15th Jan 2016 1:02pm
Re. my love
15th Jan 2016 1:45pm
when i love
i love hard
thats why its so hard for me to give it up
I love that sequence...
nice work
i love hard
thats why its so hard for me to give it up
I love that sequence...
nice work
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Re. my love
15th Jan 2016 3:44pm
Re. my love
16th Jan 2016 00:49am
I won't break your heart....your heart has suddenly became my #1 possession and I will protect it forever and ever until it is God's choice for me not to..I won't give up on us.
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Re. my love
16th Jan 2016 9:17pm
Welcome, vellyvell-7, to DUP. You're off to a good start - all the best!
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Re. my love
Anonymous
20th Jan 2016 3:30am
*Wow*. . .~Devlin.
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Re. my love
31st Aug 2016 11:33pm
Sadly, love comes with no guarantees, and strangely enough, that's what makes it so fascinating.
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