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Shut Down
Happy Birthday I said
He gave me a thumbs up
On the book
that hurt my soul
i wont let this go
How can i be in love with such a jerk
I ask myself all the time
I cry on the inside
Holding back my desperate tears
Every time i think of him
He gave me a thumbs up
On the book
that hurt my soul
i wont let this go
How can i be in love with such a jerk
I ask myself all the time
I cry on the inside
Holding back my desperate tears
Every time i think of him
Published 15th Jan 2016
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15th Jan 2016 8:53pm
If my interpretation is accurate the mechanical, robotic response to the birthday greeting is a problem? There usually is something worth holding on to, despite the gloomy depiction...
15th Jan 2016 11:26pm
I don't fully understand what you mean but all i know is that yesterday (the day i submitted the poem and the day of his bday) i gave him a happy birthday message and he responded with a thumbs up. He did the thing a jerk would do. Not respond with a thank you and shut my ass down. It hurt because i'm in love with him. Well i guess i was lucky he even responded at all. Considering i expected him to just ignore the message. Like i said I'm in love with a jerk...... who frankly has a great personality but at the same time is such an asshole. But he's the sexiest asshole i ever met. I'm going through a faze. And this poem just shows me in my current faze
