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Sonnet II
When inking calligraphic verse is fraught
And journals are bedded upon the desk,
When music would be disruptive to thought
And my ears yearn for quietude instead,
When light would cut so presumptuously
The mighty resolve of constrictor knot,
And my eyes curl deep’n in a quilted cave
Of a meticulously hand sewn vault,
When naught is felt but the deepest repose
And willing surrender to its presence,
When aught receive Love so freely bestowed
By instinctual trust and acceptance,
Then I believe with divine forbearance
I'm where I belong this Holy instance.
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12th Jan 2016 11:43pm
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Re. Sonnet II
12th Jan 2016 11:58pm
I wonder why you ask for friendly feedback, when
surely nothing else could really be possible, for
such a skilful and attractive sonnet...
if I ever decide to take up poetry,
I'll take up yours for inspiration..:)
surely nothing else could really be possible, for
such a skilful and attractive sonnet...
if I ever decide to take up poetry,
I'll take up yours for inspiration..:)
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Re. Sonnet II
13th Jan 2016 00:43am
Powerfully peaceful and a beautiful invitation to just be. I think a quilted cave is beckoning...
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Re. Sonnet II
13th Jan 2016 3:05am
Wow, now this is poetry Ahvahti, you are some kind of talent I'll say
loved this...
(((((((((Ahavati))))))))
Jackie xoxo
loved this...
(((((((((Ahavati))))))))
Jackie xoxo
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13th Jan 2016 8:52am
Re. Sonnet II
13th Jan 2016 9:04am
to be in the correct place at the proper time: invaluable.
beautiful poetry...
beautiful poetry...
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13th Jan 2016 12:08pm
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13th Jan 2016 6:02pm
Re. Sonnet II
13th Jan 2016 7:12pm
there's something so deeply feminine here in the colors & textures of your words...
... you are otherworldly, miss. truly.
... you are otherworldly, miss. truly.
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14th Jan 2016 2:20am
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Re. Sonnet II
19th Jan 2016 7:39pm
"When aught receive Love so freely bestowed" - this is the key to the instance - a beautiful write
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Re. Sonnet II
Anonymous
17th Jun 2018 1:41am
Absolutely love this ebb and flow style.
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17th Jun 2018 11:28am
Thank you, Joda.
I haven't visited structured form in awhile, though I love it.
I haven't visited structured form in awhile, though I love it.