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I've Been Told ~
I've been told I have a mouth like Sam Kinison; well fuck my mouth,
I've been told I remind people of Bette
Midler; must be the red lipstick,
I really think it's the nose.
I've been told there's a pulse in my kiss;
that unleashes a stream of wild thoughts,
I've been told I'm intimidating; it must be
because I walk into a room like I own it.
I've been told there's glitter in my eye's; just your reflection my darling, I'll say.
I've been told I'd be fucked six ways from Sunday; I'm not even sure what that means, but with a gleaming smile I say, prove it.
I've been told I remind people of Bette
Midler; must be the red lipstick,
I really think it's the nose.
I've been told there's a pulse in my kiss;
that unleashes a stream of wild thoughts,
I've been told I'm intimidating; it must be
because I walk into a room like I own it.
I've been told there's glitter in my eye's; just your reflection my darling, I'll say.
I've been told I'd be fucked six ways from Sunday; I'm not even sure what that means, but with a gleaming smile I say, prove it.
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Re. I've Been Told ~
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7th Jan 2016 7:04pm
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7th Jan 2016 7:48pm
Re. I've Been Told ~
Bette, I am intrigued by this "I've been told there's a pulse in my kiss;." This is super sexy...I love the confidence. Brava! BTW Bette wishes she looked like you :)
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7th Jan 2016 10:05pm
You always say the best thing's GW! I'm a Bette fan from way back. Thank you my friend 😊
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7th Jan 2016 11:02pm
Well your poems, at times, are "the wind beneath my wings." :) And the "Rose" in m,y lapel...okay I'll stop now ;)
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LMFAO! That's great. 😀
I had a picture to go with this....my face and Sam's face but I see it didn't post.
I had a picture to go with this....my face and Sam's face but I see it didn't post.
Re. I've Been Told ~
8th Jan 2016 2:59am
your poem sparkles like polished brass, Tommie,
& sets the night on fire
at least six ways...
& sets the night on fire
at least six ways...
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8th Jan 2016 2:36pm
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8th Jan 2016 12:17pm
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8th Jan 2016 2:39pm
It's never a quiet moment Poet, well maybe when I'm sleeping. Thanks so much 😊
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12th Jan 2016 7:45pm
Yeah, I can see the Sam Kinnison. Brash! Unafraid! Straight forward! Truthful! It's good to know exactly where a pretty woman stands. As a kid, I used to think Kinnison and Danny DeVito were the same
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12th Jan 2016 8:08pm
I can't pretend to be anything else then what I am. You nailed it Fatboy! I can see it, Sam and Danny. Thank you for reading me 😊